Reviews for Surprises
SovietAxelus chapter 7 . 11/23/2016
please continue thus
SSTrans chapter 6 . 3/20/2016
I like this story I hope you continue it.
Guest chapter 6 . 5/7/2013
emmawalters090 chapter 2 . 5/6/2013
poor kataro :(
emmawalters090 chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
god i love this story i hope there will be 50 chapters coming right :)
phoenix warrior rising chapter 6 . 2/9/2013
Aliciaally chapter 6 . 12/26/2012
Hello I'm wat come on make onther one for me please
Yonna chapter 6 . 12/26/2012
Wat happens next!
johanna chapter 2 . 12/20/2012
hey can you pleae correct it's kotaro and not kataro
3BFFs chapter 6 . 12/17/2012
Poor Jiro, that was my reaction to Twilight well except I was forced to watch the entire thing. Anyway great job and he's right, children and babies do laugh at another person's misery!
3BFFs chapter 5 . 12/16/2012
This is amazing! Please continue it! I'd love to see Jiro's reaction to being told he's going to be a daddy!
Animefan151 chapter 5 . 8/5/2012
This is getting really good please update
Weeeeeee chapter 5 . 8/4/2012
This is great please update soon
ninemelodies chapter 5 . 6/1/2012
Okay, I'm sure this would be a good story, but I can't read it.

When your typing dialogue, when the speaker changes, start a new paragraph.

Like this:

"Mom, what's for dinner?" I yelled down the hall.

"Tacos!" My mom yelled back.