Reviews for Hollywood Immortals
theronjohn325 chapter 9 . 7/9/2013
To be honest it was a little short on detail, but other than that it was good.
theronjohn325 chapter 4 . 7/9/2013
Its getting interesting, good job so far.
theronjohn325 chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Its too soon to tell, I'll let you what I think in other chapters.
DoomStone chapter 7 . 6/27/2012
Really? They find out that easily? To be honest, you were close, but no cigar.
The Raven's Nevermore chapter 5 . 6/26/2012
Cool! This sounds kinda interesting please continue!
DoomStone chapter 5 . 6/22/2012
Yeah, hi. Um, listen. I normally don't make a point of reading stories like this one. But one thing that I think apllies to most stories is that I think you need longer chapters. By the thousand and a half word mark would be great. And please, PLEASE add more of a horror or action element. Not knockin your style here, cuz I think it's admirable for you to think up a story like this. Just, please take my advise into consideration.
Eyes Like Stars chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Hullo! I actually have an account in this but just to make it quick...

I'll be frank, this piece needs work. I don't mean it in a mean way, but still. First, make sure you punctuate your work properly. Second, try using descriptions and that kind of stuff... Because your story feels incomplete without proper details or emotions. If you want help or something, just send a message to irocklikeastar. But, I like where the story's going. Keep writing!
ViktorTheElder chapter 2 . 4/26/2012
Very intiresting start to the story. Can't wait to see what happens later.
Haz and Boobear chapter 2 . 4/25/2012
OMG plz continue!
Haz and Boobear chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
I love it soooo much