Reviews for Observations |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of my favorite DetCo fics! And also one of the first ones I read lol. I lost track of it because I couldn't remember the title but damn I'm so happy I was able to find it again! Thank you for writing this I am insane about it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kuroba Kaito is scared ! XD |
![]() ![]() STOP THIS. STOP WRITING SO AMAZINGLY MY HEART CANNOT HANDLE IT (jk this was such a splendid read thank you so much) This is likely my favourite Detective Conan fanfic. Every character was just *chef's kiss*. So well written, so nuanced and so, so entertaining to read. Thank you so much for writing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay so- amazing story and omakes. I haven't slept since I've started binging this lmao. Absolutely wonderful story. The only thing I'd say in criticism would be in regards to grammar mistakes, especially with apostrophes and homophones, occasionally other things such as commas or strange clauses but apostrophes and homophones especially (ex. plurals, or their/there/they're). Other than that, the story was amazing, the plot was interesting and left me hooked all the way through, the pacing was great (even when you shifted to less exciting scenes, they were still important and well done enough to keep me wanting to keep on reading), the different POVs were well done (especially the criminals, LOVED those, you did totally outstanding on that part), the chapters were a satisfying length, not too long or too short... Very great story, very entertaining, well written, and really the only thing I can say in criticism would be in regards to grammar. I enjoyed this the entire way through and it kept me entertained for almost 100k words, and that is very much appreciated. Loved this, thanks for writing it~ Probably gonna have to come back and reread it someday... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay I was gonna just wait to comment until the end but I just gotta say- wow. All the different POVs have been wonderful, and you've gotten the different people down pretty good, but this criminal dude is just so wonderfully written. You really got into that mindset well, I think. Amazingly well done. Loving this story so far :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is really good, I usually look for stories that are more character interaction moments with a more... uninvolved(?) case but this is a real gem (it does have a lot of conan and takagi character interactions which is what I was looking for, but the case was very engaging, I was on the edge of my seat when the last day came lol) I loved the puppy analogy by the way, I don't really get why puppy would be lame when they're already calling him kitten though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the hard work loved the story _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wait... IT WAS TAKAGI xD I didnt realize... |
![]() ![]() ![]() YOU DAMN HATTORI WITH YOUR SLIP UPS! xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() But I guess that's out of the question by his response... or is it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my God, I just thought of something.. what if the 'man' is actually just Vermouth xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH. MY. GOD. TELL IT'S VERMOUTH. IT'S VERMOUTH! AAAAAAAAA- xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() your story so awesome to the point I get stomachache...too nervous |
![]() ![]() ![]() aahhh...totally forget about the reception problem..jeez |
![]() ![]() ![]() your story so awesome to the point I can't stay still due nervousness...jeez |