Reviews for Wisp
aabc chapter 53 . 1/25
I guess everyone need adult conversation, but I'm pretty sure Wisp will not like Tanya. I hope I'm wrong, cause another strong female roll model can't hurt. Massages wouldn't hurt either... I just don't want Edward to rekindle the romance with her... It just seems wrong.
paragod chapter 53 . 1/25
Thanks, for the chapter. I needed a wisp fix.

twiannfav chapter 53 . 1/24
thank you xxx
lovepath chapter 53 . 1/24
Lovely and lyrical. I really think you did a good job of capturing Edward's emotions and process, although I wonder if all his conclusions will be correct. More story soon, please?
LizzyAtTheLake chapter 53 . 1/24
I live this story! I am so eager for the next update. You have developed these character so beautifully. I can actually see Edward spending some time with Tanya. That's funny, because I'm usually a Tanya hater! I can see where he would need/want some one on one time with a female peer, particularly one that he is/was attracted to.

I believe Wisp will have an epic fit of jealously and do something remarkable.
Angeldolphin01 chapter 53 . 1/24
I love it. This is a great chapter.
twicrazreader chapter 53 . 1/24
Hey Cris
I thought this was a great chapter.
Tanya was good company for Edward. I not sure she should be around Wisp but its your call.
Just glad to have them back!
dorothybert chapter 53 . 1/24
Another wonderful instalment. Thanks for this tender writing.
Daylen chapter 53 . 1/24
Amazing chapter for Edward there - he did need the break from everything for a little bit. Looking forward to seeing what Wisp makes of Tanya when they eventually meet. Her use of alternative therapy could actually go well, being a more gentle approach than mainstream medicines. Something that Wisp would appreciate perhaps?
SarahCullenxxx chapter 53 . 1/24
Wow, I really like Tanya :) great chapter and can't wait for more :) xx
LizzyAtTheLake chapter 48 . 1/24
I've been reading over on the TWCS. I love your story! It's absolutely addicting. I'm wondering if you happened to read the TwiFic "Emancipation Proclomation". It has been since removed and is now a published story called Sempre (Forever) by J M Darhower. The writing is OK, but the story is incredible. Based on how you've described what you like, I think you would love this one
CrookedArm chapter 53 . 1/24
I'm not sure what I want Edward and Bella to be to one another in this story. Their relationship is so sweet. But I do know that I want more of this story! And more, MUCH more forward movement for Bella. Thanks for writing!
ms.Tee2011 chapter 53 . 1/24
this story is such a mystery to me I really just want to find out what's going on, who is James working with. are they going to get wisp. can't wait to the next chapter
Nissa-Cullen chapter 53 . 1/24
He may need some adult interaction but he still needs wisp too. How will she react to Tanya? I'd be interested to see that. She survived the day without Edward and he survived without her. All is well. Will he an Rosalie talk and make up? I think he needs to apologize too. He kind of blew up at her. She was just trying to talk to him and get him to see Emmett's side of things.
izlovezvampires chapter 53 . 1/24
Massage therapists are wonderful people. Anyone who has ever been can attest.

As I read this chapter it felt like he was deciding to leave Wisp and that maybe everyone else was right that he should return to his previous "adult" life. His homecoming was short and sweet, and not so reassuring. Is he going to get back onto a relationship w/ Tanya? It was a little unnerving that she was described as kind...but had cold eyes. That says she is up to no good. Yes, Edward needed a night out but...this was a confusing chapter.

Eager for more and enjoying the new story.

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