Reviews for Wisp
TwilighterSam1989 chapter 63 . 11/23/2014
Just wow...
MiaLuthor chapter 63 . 11/23/2014
Thank you for Wisp. She is one of the greatest of gifts. Thank you for your overwhelming generosity and your kind spirit.
Susy chapter 63 . 11/21/2014
Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful story. You have taken us through so many emotional highs and lows; what a ride. I will definitely miss the updates but look forward to any future takes.
Guest chapter 63 . 11/21/2014
beautiful ending
thank you so much for this story. it was hard to read but it gave me lot of hope
big hugs
rana
Guest chapter 63 . 11/21/2014
A beautiful story ...thanks
tracyluvstwilight2010 chapter 63 . 11/23/2014
I enjoyed reading this chapter.
parkesy23 chapter 63 . 11/22/2014
Omg. Just wow. What a journey it has been. Thank you so much
SLKerouac chapter 63 . 11/22/2014
Emily is visiting Bella trying to explain that she could not go home. Bella missed Edward so much and she just wanted to go back to the cabin and him. Emily talked more with Bella about where she was at was going to help her more. that she was going to learn things that she needed to know. Later Bella met with her new social worker and the judge. The judge agreed that Bella needed a conservator and Carlisle volunteered. Bella stayed and learned more about being independent. Edward had moved back to Seattle to his condo. He did not want to stay in the cabin without Bella there. He was not doing well himself and finally did what Emily suggested. He found a therapist for himself. To work threw everything that had happened. Tanya had called several times but Edward would not answer the phone so she quit calling. Edward felt she got the message that he wanted nothing to do with her. Later Edward had his second appointment with his therapist. At the door was a knock. He answered only to find Bella at his door with crutches but standing up right and walking. He was so surprised. He was making sure that this was real. Bella went into the condo and was then in Edward's arms. He took her to the couch. They talked more. He told Bella that there was no more Tanya or anyone else. That it was just him and her. He told her that he loved her. They talked more about her getting on the bus to come over to his place. That Carlisle gave her the address. She told Carlisle that she needed to do this by herself. Edward and Bella ate her favorite pizza while talking more. Edward and Bella compromised with Bella living with Edward but going back to her halfway house to learn more. Bella said she would do that because it was more like school. Bella told Edward that she wanted to go back home but would stay where he was at. Bella told Edward that she just wanted to be loved with Edward telling her that she was so much by the whole family. Bella told Edward that Tanya had told her that Edward was not her Prince Charming but to Bella he was because he saved her. It was then a year and half later that Edward and Bella moved back to Forks. Bella now had a job. She was going to be trained by Garrett and take over his position with the police. The family had a welcome back party and Bella was so happy. Edward knew that Bella would have her days. That some things would never be the same. That she would not be "normal" but he still loved her. He still wanted to marry her but Bella did not want that. She had been told repeatedly with religion about marriage and she did not want anything to do with religion. Edward knew that Bella was his. that she loved him and only wanted him but hoped that one day she would change her mind. Edward and Bella had talked about children. They both decided that there would be none. Carlisle and Esme were sad but they had Chase now. That there would be an extended family with children. Carlisle was still Bella conservator but he did not interfere with Edward and Bella's life. He knew that she was well taken care of and loved. Edward watched Bella with Chase. She loved the little boy. Edward was now thinking about all the changes. What Bella/Wisp was like when he first saw her and what she had grown into. She had a job and she was happy. Bella had a special smile for Edward and it was only for him. Bella was with someone that truly loved her and would take care of her no matter what. It was Bella finally winning over all the men that had hurt her in the past. She was her own person now. Thanks for writing this story. It was a journey and I love how you brought it along. Please continue writing! Next!
Guest chapter 63 . 11/20/2014
Absolutely wonderful
Guest chapter 63 . 11/20/2014
I feel sad... Will there be an Epilogue or some more outtakes?
Guest chapter 63 . 11/20/2014
Yeah he sure saved her by bringing Tanya into her home and fucking her right down the hall loud enough for her to hear. He's a selfish prick that doesn't deserve her. Thanks for the rushed unsatisfying ending.
Guest chapter 63 . 11/20/2014
Thank you! Thank you! This was one of the best story, wonderfully written in or out of FF! Soo much better in fact than the one you got the characters from! You took a very dark theme and made it beautiful! You are a gifted writer and I look forward to buying any book you've written. Thank you again for generously sharing your considerable talent!
Guest chapter 63 . 11/20/2014
Since Emily, the Cullen’s and Rosalie all encouraged him to get it on with Tanya.
They all knew she was coming to visit and heartily approved.
Emily encouraged him to have adult women’s company but didn’t think, in her opinionated way, to warn him to be careful what he divulged to said women.
From what I remember with Tanya's questioning about why he couldn’t tell Wisp this or that, or trick Wisp into obeying so that she could get alone time with Edward and all the other suggestions and opinions she had of Wisp … created great difficulty for him at the time.
Now that we know Edward blamed himself for talking to Tanya and “the talking” seemed to be a very, very obvious no-no to all concerned INCLUDING TANYA.
Why didn’t he save himself so much trouble and shut Tanya up into the bargain, by quoting The Foster Carer’s Secrecy Act , which was a gift in this circumstance and say ….
“Tanya, you know I can’t discuss Wisp’s case with you or why her care has to be done in a particular way. If you don’t like it I’m afraid there is nothing I can do as I am not at liberty to divulge any information you.”
End of argument and Tanya would have to have accept it or leave.
The End chapter 63 . 11/20/2014
That isn't the end is it? Loved the chapter...but it just doesn't feel like the end.
Guest chapter 63 . 11/20/2014
Thank you for this wonderful story...
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