|Reviews for Wisp|
| Lona W. Hall chapter 35 . 12/28/2012
Very interesting story. Poor girl :( awful what people can do to each other...
I think the human race would have died out long ago if a pregnant woman couldn't carry something. It's funny, Rose insisting on an obgyn when a midwife, especially a home birth one, would give her A LOT less orders and interventions. Rose should do the orgasmic birth thing...she's always so lusty, prob work great for her :)
Looking forward to the rest of this and As Children At Play. I don't normally handle child abuse situations well since I became a mother, but for some reason, these arent putting me off...maybe because they are so extreme? Even though I objectively know situations like these can occur, I think the emotional mind tries to reject it...
| Edward'sDJ chapter 25 . 12/27/2012
It looks as though Bella's past horrible experiences have been with men, so at least Dr. L has being a woman in her favour.
| Edward'sDJ chapter 23 . 12/27/2012
Pet was an inspired choice.
| Edward'sDJ chapter 21 . 12/27/2012
Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery...
| Edward'sDJ chapter 3 . 12/27/2012
What on Earth did James imagine would happen when he lost the truck?
| Twimima7 chapter 5 . 12/27/2012
This is so intense. Rose can sure rock the boat but means well. They are all so kind and understanding and hurt for her.
| Twimima7 chapter 3 . 12/26/2012
She must have been taken at an early age and from somewhere out of the states. Possibly speaks a different language. I feel so sorry for her.
| Twimima7 chapter 2 . 12/26/2012
This one brought tears. Edward is so sweet and gentle with her.
| Twimima7 chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
This is a beginning of suspense and mystery of what he will find in the truck. Dirt bag James plays his part well in here.
| HB chapter 35 . 12/26/2012
Your story is amazing! Im obsessed! Keep it going!
| deedee cullen chapter 35 . 12/25/2012
Can I just say that this is probably one of the best (if not the best) stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I've read my fair share of abuse stories and while there are many good ones I've read this has to be my favorite. The way your have written it and the way you have molded it makes you just want to jump in to the story and live it. Its just that when I'm reading I can literally see the story unfold in my head. While this happens alot when I'm reading an actual published book (which we all know goes through a very long process to become such a great masterpiece), it doesn't always happen when I read fanfic. All in all this story is amazing and I can't wait to read more of it. Happy Holidays!
| Lauren chapter 26 . 12/24/2012
Dr. Lawton is a fat bitch and I've never wanted to fuck anyone up so bad in my entire life
| Lauren chapter 7 . 12/24/2012
I had to put this down for a few hours this chapter got me so worked up...
| SiddaCullen chapter 35 . 12/23/2012
Wow. I just spent the past two days reading your wonderfully heartbreaking story and I just have to say how much I adore your Edward. His patience and love is unending it seems. I don't think I've ever been so affected by a story as I have been yours. I am completely addicted and will be here every step of the way as Wisp heals and transforms back into Bella. However long it takes.
Also love your Rose, Esme, Jasper and Emmett. Even Carlisle lol. All the Cullens are truly amazing and I cannot wait for the next chapter.
| fireagate chapter 35 . 12/23/2012
Cannot wait for the next chapter. Love it love it