Reviews for Wisp
jujubakiller chapter 33 . 11/19/2012
Well. At least they got her name out of it.
When she asked Esme to ber her mother. WOW. I almost cried at work... again. I need to learn not to read your story while working, but my curiosity is just too huge.
Melany333 chapter 33 . 11/19/2012
love it, can't wait for more :)
KatHat chapter 33 . 11/19/2012
Come to think of it, there has not been one mention of her mother in all her backstory or anything...hmmmmm...wondering about that!

That must be one helluva virus to knock Edward out for that long, and now Wisp! Poor baby! Putting her in the hospital, they may have to sedate her to keep her in a bed, but at least they can get her fluids and nutrients.

And they have a name! Go, something with it!
mrsm0803 chapter 33 . 11/19/2012
I literally have goosebumps ... She said her name! This chapter just made me so sad for Wisp. The way she kept asking about Mother ... Gah! Heart breaking.
kallaney chapter 33 . 11/19/2012
Great chapter. I love it.
annaharding chapter 33 . 11/19/2012
Well, that's new! Altho we all knew what her name had to be (given the fanfiction genre!)
I hope she doesn't freak out too much in the hospital, or that other agencies stick their nose in
Thanx for the update!
debslmac chapter 33 . 11/19/2012
eliza41 chapter 33 . 11/19/2012
She said her name and then you end it. What a cliffie. Not fair. Great chapter.
Babe Pryor chapter 33 . 11/19/2012
Isabella, she said her name...did they get that? Will they know its her name? this is 33 chapters in, seems to me this is an epic tale, so much to cover...such slow progress...actually the progress is backwards now..gone downhill steadily, and now with both sick, Edward must feel helpless and hopeless, wonder if he's thinking of throwing in the towel? xxx
looie chapter 33 . 11/19/2012
Shiiiiiiiitttttt i thought at this point you couldn't surprise me anymore but you have proved me wrong. We have a name!
sherryola chapter 33 . 11/19/2012
Oh my goodness! First, I thought my heart was going to break over Wisp calling Esme mother in that way, looking for that person in her life. Another one of those times I just want to hug her. And then the end, she finally said her own name but so sick. i'm really dreading her going to the hospital actually. Very nervous for the next chapter. But also anxious to get back to edward's involvement.
Guest chapter 33 . 11/19/2012
A Name! How bout that?!

I knew it was either Bella or Jessica, but I couldn't be sure.
galaxy69uk chapter 33 . 11/19/2012
Ohhhhh that's mean leaving it there but finally hope!
flojo03 chapter 33 . 11/19/2012
oh no both of them sick, but so glad that esme & rosalie worked out what wisp had done while edward was sick and then for her to give them her name at the end, big break through
have a fantastic birthday!
VronniePantz chapter 33 . 11/19/2012
omg... u did NOT just finish it there! gahhhhh cruel :)
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