|Reviews for Wisp|
| tsm0836 chapter 53 . 1/31
It was great that Edward got some adult time with Tanya. She sounds like a great friend to have. If anyone thinks that a massage therapist is 'skanky', obviously had a good massage by a qualified therapist and knows the benefits. Thank you for sharing your words they are always worth waiting for.
| horseap chapter 53 . 1/30
please please please update soon!
| Guest chapter 53 . 1/29
Are you going to update this because I love this story so much!
| Grumpy Cat chapter 53 . 1/27
What up Cris? I hope I remembered your name right. I never review but I wanted to tell you thanks so much for this story. I enjoyed it immensely. I thought it was so original. The pacing is perfect. The one entry from Wisp's POV was pretty cool. I'm glad that it's almost all Edward but it was so intriguing that one time (I hope it was really just one time cause that's all I remember) but I am constantly wondering if we readers will get a peep again into her diamond mind.
Some of my other favs include that scene when Edwards get's all shaken up hearing Wisp beg him to stay and I thought it was hilarious what she cusses and gets jealous over Tanya's phone call. Looking forward to see how things develope if Edward decides to date Tanya again. I think Wisp's reactions will be epic when they meet soon. I just can not wait for that. I think jealous Wisp is going to be a catalyst for some huge changes in the dynamics of the relationship between Edward and Wisp.
I also wanted to write something encouraging about your personal life. I feel a connection on that level because I too have suffered from depression. I have been committed 2X so I know it sucks. I hope things get better for you sooner rather than later. XO
| RoryCullen chapter 53 . 1/27
I'm so relieved Edward returned home and was obviously so elated and sated to be in Wisp's arms again. I think the fact that Rose came by was probably what kept Wisp from having a melt-down from Edward's long absence, since she sees Esme practically every day, but Rose is more of a treat- who left all too abruptly and in an agitated state the last time - and in her mind she might have put that together that Rose was with her so Edward could go away for a while.
I was not expecting Tanya to show up in the story again. I was expecting a different type of turmoil to do with Wisp's captors perhaps but not Tanya. Clearly she still likes him, and I am surprised that she is not asserting her wishes more strongly, but perhaps she knows he would not respond favorably if she did and instead is taking her time to win his favor and enmesh herself into his life. She is probably no dummy and realizes that Wisp means a lot to him and wants to check out for herself the relationship he has with Wisp. I would think when she meets Wisp and sees them together that she tells Edward what she sees that he is in love with Wisp and that clearly she (Tanya) has no chance with him.
I wonder will Tanya's incense or Crystals bring back any bad memories for Wisp of her captors? These people used to make her pray to false deities, and memorize Bible verses, so maybe they used candles, or incense, or the like. Now that could be something good that could come out of Tanya's reemergence in Edward's life.
| NanStew chapter 53 . 1/27
My chiropractor had one in his office. It's great. Helps you relax and the adjustments just work better.
| irelandk chapter 53 . 1/27
| Gillian Aubrey chapter 53 . 1/27
I can see how Edward feels conflicted about wanting adult companionship but also wanting to be with Wisp. I'm also glad Tanya was so cool during their evening out. I do think if she shows up Wisp might be a bit pissed about it tho.
| Guest chapter 53 . 1/26
AHHHHHHHH. SOOOOOO GOOOOODDDDDDDDD. OHMYGOD. PLEASE UPDATE?
| piccolover22 chapter 53 . 1/26
Oh my gosh it has taken me forever to catch up on this story! Hahah I've been reading it forever but always lose where I stop so I just end up rereading the whole story! But it's amazing I love your story! Looking forward to the next update!
| enisnomine chapter 53 . 1/26
You are right a massage therapist can do wonders. I have had problems with my shoulders for several years, but my therapist has made my life much easier. I can move much more freely now.
I enjoy your story very much. When you began, I couldn't figure how you would proceed/ Now I find I like the way you are progressing.
| Evelyne-raconte chapter 53 . 1/26
OH MY ROB ! An other EXCELLENT chapter of yours. It's a real pleasure to have an alert in my inbox for your wonderful story. I hope you are in good health and that every thing is the best possible for you. Take care of you. I wish you a happy new year, bonne et heureuse année 2014 !
| Bobby's girl chapter 53 . 1/25
I want make a little prediction: Tanya and her South American trip will have something to do with wisp's past.
| Guest chapter 53 . 1/25
Lovin this story
| SLKerouac chapter 53 . 1/26
Edward is having a hard time with how he felt toward Emmett and Rosalie. That Emmett should not have questioned him about James' death. Emmett knew that Edward was not that kind of person to kill someone. Rosalie was a little testy too. She knew that the problems needed to be fixed between Edward and Emmett. Edward was just nasty with her and she was not going to be a part of that any longer. Edward had picked up new locks for the cabin and installed them. Wisp was watching him. Rose left after having words with Edward. Wisp watched this happening. Wisp wanted Rose and Edward was not going to call Rose. Edward tried the hot tub but Wisp just wanted Rose. He was a little jealous about that. Edward had a date with Tanya and Esme was there to watch Wisp. She told him to go and have fun. Esme also wanted to know what happened because Wisp was so sad. Edward really didn't want to tell Esme but just that he and Rose had words. Edward drove to Seattle to his apartment. He felt himself somewhat relax. Tanya had let herself in and showed Edward how. She handed over his key. They went out to dinner. They talked and then Edward told Tanya everything that has happened. About Wisp. About how he found her. About Emmett and Rosalie. About everything. She listened. Edward noticed the changes in Tanya. She stayed the night since she had been drinking. Nothing happened that night. The next morning Tanya and Edward had breakfast and she talked him in to coming to her office to get a massage. He went and now was somewhat relaxed. Before he left he went to the store and bought a few things for Wisp, Esme and Carlisle. He got back and Wisp was at the door with Esme. He picked her up and he felt like he was home. Did Rosalie tell Esme what has been happening between Edward and Emmett? Does Tanya try to come and see Edward at the cabin? Is there someone out there trying to find Wisp? Does Emmett find out more information regarding Wisp? Does Edward and Emmett get together and talk? What is going on in Wisp's mind now that Edward had been gone? What does Edward do next to keep Wisp in his life? Keep writing!