|Reviews for Wisp|
| BellaTesoro chapter 3 . 12/2/2012
Well she couldn't be a slave because she doesn't seem comfortable around household
items. Seems she's been left to live like a wild child, like a pet. Not able to sit. Treated
just like a pet, that's why she understands "good girl" and "bath" she must have been kept as an animal. Horrors.
| Milk40 chapter 34 . 12/2/2012
Carlisle doesn't seem evil to me at all. I guess it's all about perception...
| sparklymagpie chapter 34 . 12/2/2012
I'm so glad to know that you are out of the hospital ! I hope that you are doing well and whatever was wrong with you is now fixed. Thank you for the update. Glad to see that both Edward and Wisp are on the mend.
| sballLuvr5 chapter 34 . 12/2/2012
Oh Wisp. I could kill her father, with my bare hands. I wonder if he's alive. Wisp really breaks my heart. She seems to understand that she's Isabella, but she was also aware enough that she asked to be called Wisp. I'm proud of her for telling Edward what she want. Loved this chapter and I hope you're feeling better! :)
| BellaTesoro chapter 2 . 12/2/2012
She is like a pet isn't she? It's sad that she has to be treated as if she's a mere animal in
need of human kindness. What could have happened to her? Why can't she speak?
Edward can't just keep her as if she's an abandoned puppy, right? So sad.
| sassy41 chapter 34 . 12/2/2012
you so much want her to be better but i understand sometimes things just don't work out
she has had such a hard life and the training they inflected on her was knew what they where do and why. such a poor little girl who never had a chance in life how sad
| Ness1956 chapter 34 . 12/2/2012
| Della291 chapter 34 . 12/2/2012
OMG - I knew that she was going to get sick, thank goodness that they were able to get her to the hospital for treatment.
Now I wonder what's going to come out of the increase words she's saying. She never really said please or your's that I remember reading, and Isabella is DEFINITELY a big one.
Now for you, hope that everything is okay with you.
| Kerry Hale chapter 34 . 12/2/2012
| dragonsong94 chapter 34 . 12/2/2012
Please please let Edward and Wisp get to Disney land. I'm so attached to you character it probably isn't healthy. I need her to be happy
| BellaTesoro chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
I like how you kept the reader on pins and needles. You just knew that James was up to
some dark dirty deed and that it centered on that truck.
You wrote this so eerily spell binding. I felt Edward's horror as he, alone, piece by slow piece uncovered that body. I'm wondering if it is dead, maybe just beaten.
I'm in this journey.
| Courtney37 chapter 34 . 12/2/2012
GAH MY HEART! :'( poor wisp! But Edward being at her bedside? GAH! That was soo romantic! I absolutely loved it and can't wait to find out more. Thanks again. Bye for now.
| Guest chapter 7 . 12/2/2012
I liked this story (despite its nonsensicalness) up until this chapter, but I can tell you, I won't be reading it anymore. In our culture victims of mental illness are treated with extreme disrespect, something that you are reinforcing. Contrary to your belief, psychiatric hospitals are not in fact just places for dangerous psychos to be locked up. As someone who has been an inpatient at a psychiatric hospital, I found this extremely offensive. Clearly you have little to no knowledge about them or the patients that get help there. I advise that you do some actual research before spouting out offensive opinions on such complex and difficult subjects as mental health. Contrary to your intention, this chapter actually made me almost favor Dr. Lawton, just because of the sheer offensive ignorance of the characters that I'm apparently supposed to like.
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 34 . 12/2/2012
I think her being delerious with fever was a blessing in disguise. It brought back
to the forefront of her mind her earliest memories, and even some cognition of
communication. Enough for her to request the name Wisp over Isabella. It was
a clear request.
| cullengirl08 chapter 34 . 12/2/2012
I loved this chapter, cuz Edward and Wisp were finally back together. And I'm so happy that she is getting well enough to go home, which is what they both need right now. Home and in a comfortable environment. But I think they need to leave that Isabella name behind as she does not like it at all. She likes Wisp and I hope that everyone will keep calling her that as well.