|Reviews for Wisp|
| DrawnToTheNight chapter 32 . 11/17/2012
omg! Go Wisp! woop woop
very cleverly written if I may say.
| Guest chapter 32 . 11/16/2012
Love, love, love!
| maryef chapter 32 . 11/16/2012
im so glad you wrote rose as a nice person. she's always the bitch and that gets old after awhile. i enjoyed wisps point of view but cant see this as a romance story. are you going to surprise us?
| carolamex chapter 32 . 11/16/2012
This was amazing, I felt her anxiety like I was there. This was really really well done. You are like Bill Condon, surprising us! LOL thanks babe. Thanks for letting us know E will be fine. Poor baby. Xoxo
| mrsm0803 chapter 32 . 11/16/2012
I loved this chapter! Wisp looking after Pet and Edward was so heartwarming and sweet. I think it's really positive in terms of her recovery. The more we learn about her past, it becomes clear what a strong survivor she is. I hope this chapter means she will start to respond again. Great story :)
| cilie chapter 32 . 11/16/2012
I saw your tweet about reviews being down for this chapter, and I'm usually such a failure at reviewing, but here I am, reviewing!
I love being inside Wisp's mind. She's really made progress, and it's great to know that she's actually able to do all these things when she really needs to.
Poor Edward, I wonder how much he'll beat himself up when he realizes Wisp was all alone without food for so long. I really hope you don't make us wait too long for your next update, and I promise to review more often! :)
| pudget12 chapter 32 . 11/16/2012
MOVIE WAS FANTASTIC! and this is such a sweet chapter, I enjoy being able to see into Wisps mind.
| teamswitzerlandmom chapter 32 . 11/16/2012
Wonderful chapter. It's really interesting to see things from Wisp's POV and get into her mind. Thanks for writing. By the way BD2 was amazing. Best one so far.
| Edwards littel Pixxy chapter 32 . 11/16/2012
| barbarito chapter 32 . 11/16/2012
| ecullensgurl chapter 32 . 11/16/2012
I loved WPOV.
| cullengirl08 chapter 32 . 11/16/2012
If it wasn't obvious before, it's totally obvious now, how much Wisp cares for Edward. I was very proud of her this chapter; she helped try and make Edward feel better, and fed Pet all on her own. I really hope that this is a turning point for her and she will start doing things that she was doing before the bible and it's sayings came into the picture.
| Sophiepicklegirl chapter 32 . 11/16/2012
Great chapter from Wisp's POV. Nice to see she is starting to think for herself a bit too!
| DreamQuill chapter 32 . 11/15/2012
You are responsible for me using half a box of Kleenex. I'm not complaining though. This was an amazing chapter! Little Wisp is brighter than we think and has a big heart. I was so proud of the way she tried to take care of Edward. I was almost biting my nails when she had to feed Pet on her own. I was scared she was going to eat the food too. I am gonna have nightmares about that litter box.
Wisp is confused about a lot of things. She needs to know her living with Edward is permanent but I don't know how they can make her understand. She is learning who to trust, but I can understand why Carlisle reading the Bible scared her since her father was a bad man.
"Wisp falls asleep with one hand on her kitten, the other still clutching the granola bar tightly."
The best ending line I've read in a long time. Please update soon.
| Courtney37 chapter 32 . 11/15/2012
AWWW! I'm SOOO proud of Wisp! She took care of him & Pet too! God I am beaming with pride! Can't wait to read more. Thanks again. Bye for now.