Reviews for Wisp
jazzcrank chapter 31 . 11/12/2012
This is soooo good...poor wisp/Bella and what a way to be waken up edward btw u have no idea how excited I am for wisps pov ahhh...I kind of want to read the outtake but at the same time I don't
Hannah chapter 31 . 11/12/2012
YAY! I love when you update, puts a smile on my face :) I'm extremely interested to see what WPOV will be like next chapter. Keep up the fantastic work!
natalayx chapter 31 . 11/12/2012
dhsujgsjfhs omfg you kill me. YOU KILL ME, I TELL YOU. LOL AT EMMETT FEEDING EDWARDO DRINK AFTER DRINK HAHAHA. I feel so bad for Eddie :( He must be going insane, but Jasper is right. He needs a psychologist to help him. And Rose is right about Edward needing to admit he needs help too. Speaking of Rose, I LOVE HER SO MUCH. She is hilarious and badass but can be so sweet and considerate sometimes :") YOU'RE AMAZING, YOUR WORDS ARE BEAUTIFUL AND SMART AND LOVELY AND YOU MAKE MY HEART MUSHY BUT I LOVE YOU OK BAI
Sleepless in Virginia chapter 31 . 11/12/2012
Love this Rose - great combination of tough and nurturing. Very good!
Narges chapter 30 . 11/11/2012
you coukd actually feel the despair and helplesness in every word of this chapter. i cried for him. not for wisp, but for him.
helenemc chapter 31 . 11/11/2012
Brilliant move on Rose's part.
melissamary55 chapter 31 . 11/11/2012
love it and cant wiat to read WPOV i bet is goig to be really interesting
roxnroll chapter 31 . 11/11/2012
OMG! Wisps POV? I can't wait! I really would love to look into her mind! I'm so glad that I never read that Wisp-take on TWCS...I've been fighting with myself to just hold out!
Rox
Guest chapter 31 . 11/11/2012
My heart breaks for both of them :(
And can you please say if you are going to post the futuretake somewhere?Thanks!
shar0525 chapter 31 . 11/11/2012
I hate to agree with Carlisle but I think Edward and rose need help.
Lovely story.
pipelynn chapter 31 . 11/11/2012
Cannot imagine what's going on in wisps head! Grateful for this awesome rose...
bella0609 chapter 31 . 11/11/2012
Love this Rose...She's gonna be a great mom :) Love the story, but a tough read, I'm in for the long haul, I just don't see a HEA or a realtionship (sexual, loving) between Edward and Wisp/Bella. I guess I was hoping. I don't see it as a possibility. It would be a miracle. Too many variables - not unless Edward does get some help - some major excellent help - someone who really knows what they are doing and is able to make a connection and Edward is willing to work in connection or take a back seat. That might be hard for him...I think he wants to be her all 'n all.
pipelynn chapter 30 . 11/11/2012
Ugh, so sad. Hate this for Edward and poor little wisp. Hope she snaps out of it soon...
weedstert chapter 31 . 11/11/2012
Rose is brilliant :)
Hev99 chapter 31 . 11/11/2012
Oh God, my heart. She's breaking it! It's so sad to see her so limp and unresponsive, though I'm glad Rosalie managed to get her to eat something. I think a trip to the hospital could do her way more harm than good. Especially since hospitals aren't quite as understanding about not using furniture. I really love Rosalie though. She's just what Wisp needs. She's str
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