|Reviews for Wisp|
| 2old4fanfic chapter 14 . 7/19/2012
There are some people who just deserve the death penalty
| akaMick chapter 3 . 7/19/2012
I'm nervous, but not about what happened to her. It's what will happen to her when she wakes up and finally remembers where she is! I wouldn't sleep if I were Edward...never know what she might do if she wakes up and is confused enough, she might actually lash out at him and not realize what she is doing. Great chapter!
| 2old4fanfic chapter 13 . 7/19/2012
the magic of kittens
| 2old4fanfic chapter 12 . 7/19/2012
a kitten is a great idea. I hope Alice doesn't adopt them by the dozen
| 2old4fanfic chapter 11 . 7/19/2012
art therapy is amazing, go Alice
| dj071688-Coppertop chapter 16 . 7/19/2012
Just so you know, there are really cases out there of just these type of incidences. You have written a story, but for quite a few, this is real life. Just wanted your readers to know that this type of thing does exist, and everyone should be aware.
Your handling of this story to date has been very gentle, awakening, and emotionally disturbing; yet the manner in which you have revealed each clue as to her prior life, has been methodical and informative.
| 2old4fanfic chapter 10 . 7/19/2012
Love that Rose
| akaMick chapter 2 . 7/19/2012
Great chapter! I had to read back on a few details, but caught on pretty quickly after a brief re-read. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
| 2old4fanfic chapter 9 . 7/19/2012
when i was pregnant with my first child, my ob/gyn told me "Don't come to the hospital too early, 'cause if you're there the staff feels like they have to do something to you". I'm guessing it's the same in mental health facilities
| BannahHanana chapter 16 . 7/19/2012
I absolutely adore your story! I check every day for an update XD keep up the great writing style! Can't wait to see James get what he deserves!
| 2old4fanfic chapter 7 . 7/19/2012
She reminds me of Dobby
| kinsano chapter 16 . 7/19/2012
What an intense, gut-wrenching story! I love it-I've read through all 16 chapters in one sitting! This Edward is so sweet and so protective, I just love him madly. You know, I think there are some crimes where the old 'eye for an eye' justice is called for. I would love it, if say, some big guy in prison knew about what James did to Wisp and did the same to him, saying 'how do you like it' every time he rapes him or forces him to crawl or use a litterbox... I know that's not very evolved of me, but a shovel between the eyes seems too quick and a life time in prison lifting weights seems too lenient. (I know prison isn't a cake walk-for the majority of people it would be a living hell-but for a violent repeat offender like James, it is obviously no deterrent...). Oh well, I hope Wisp's picture brings about the fall of the sex-slave/human pet ring. Without being dangerous to the gang. That's my concern with Edward's vow to find the Bad Pet Penis Man in the picture. Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter!
| 2old4fanfic chapter 6 . 7/19/2012
the men (or women) in black arrive. Should be interesting. I get the feeling Wisp doesn't officially exist
| Vl15 chapter 16 . 7/19/2012
I freaking cried during this whole thing. It's so heartbreaking.. Your writing is truly that amazing.. You feel every emotion so well..
| 2old4fanfic chapter 5 . 7/19/2012
I am no fan of slave stories, but rescued slaves are another matter. Disturbing what people will do to other people