|Reviews for Wisp|
| sassy41 chapter 33 . 11/18/2012
they have a name
oh this poor girl how much more
it seems she is retaining what she sees edward doing at least
still so far to go. she needs so much help
you almost wonder will she ever be functioning human being. i only hope for all of them
| callmepagliacci chapter 33 . 11/18/2012
Where the FUCK was Bob Ross?!
| twicrazreader chapter 33 . 11/18/2012
OMG Wisp did a lot of communicating in this chapter.
But they finally have her name.
I can't wait for more.
| sballLuvr5 chapter 33 . 11/18/2012
Oh Wisp is breaking my heart! When she asked Esme to be her mother, I almost burst into tears. And now poor little Wisp is sick too :( So now they know her name. And that her dad is an asshole douche wad. Ah! Can't wait for the next chapter! :) Also, HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Hope you have a blast :):)
| DreamQuill chapter 33 . 11/18/2012
What is this evil virus that Edward caught? I am sad he's still out of it but I loved Esme and Rose in the last few chapters. When Esme agreed to be Bella's mother, I broke down. Maybe this means Wisp has good memories of a mom? I don't know what's going on.
The ending blew my mind. I never expected her to say her name this soon. She could benefit from hypnosis. It's time they really work on her therapy as soon as Edward gets better. I'm so worried the hospital will set her back. Please update soon.
| Barbr9 chapter 33 . 11/18/2012
OMG! She told them her name. Wow so much has happened in this chapter. Poor things. Edward and Wisp so sick. I can't imagine the trauma taking Wisp to the hospital is going to do. I hope it doesn't set her back to badly. They came so far after this last setback.
| mommymac0508 chapter 33 . 11/18/2012
Oh snap her dad did this to her will they find out who she is now with a name update soon
| S1203 chapter 33 . 11/18/2012
| servantoftwilight669 chapter 33 . 11/18/2012
oh, some progress. Can't wait 4 next update.
| Kitty Bad chapter 33 . 11/18/2012
Bad Isabella. *sob* Poor, sweet, Wisp. She was so brave.
| OliveTrusty chapter 33 . 11/18/2012
She said her name! Yay!
| Petra308 chapter 33 . 11/18/2012
That sweet girl just can't catch a break having to learn about living in a new place with new people and new rules. Now she gets seriously ill to add to her misery. I hope her trauma from the impending trip to the hospital will be managed and she can make a speedy recovery so she can come home to her family.
At least they now have a name and they have a clue that her lasting impression of her father is that he thought she was bad. If he is found, maybe they can prevent her from being returned to what had to be an abusive environment.
| Lilydukes chapter 33 . 11/18/2012
SO SO SO GOOD! PLEAE UPDATE RIGHT NOW XXXXXX :) :) :) :)
| wildwoods59 chapter 33 . 11/18/2012
a name! yay!
| Eeyorefan12 chapter 33 . 11/18/2012
Oh, poor Wisp (and Edward). this was kind of a heart-wrenching chapter, first because of the illness but also because of the sweet moment with Esme and the not-so-sweet one as Wisp's delirium brings up all sorts of icky stuff. Her last line is encouraging, though ;)
Now, can I just have one moment to give Carlisle and Jasper a good shake? As doctors, why have they not prescribed a home-care nurse? (Okay, this is my real-life bias as I have a son who requires fluid IV's every few months due to intractible migraines and vomiting for 5 days at a time.) Since Wisp feels real to me sometimes, I feel like I should be suggesting it instead of the trauma of the hospital!
Yep, still,exciting to see update alerts in my mailbox! :)