|Reviews for Wisp|
| JayNahNah chapter 33 . 11/20/2012
Really good. Can't stop reading!
| evilnat chapter 33 . 11/20/2012
My heart literally skipped a beat at that last sentence!
Oh my god! It's amazing the things that come out when you're not quite coherent.
What a chapter! Thank you!
| cbmorefie chapter 33 . 11/20/2012
| pengirl25 chapter 33 . 11/20/2012
Happy birthday! You're so sweet to give us this chapter as a present on your day. Thank you. I have been reading since the beginning over the last few days, ignoring my regular updates ;). This was impossible to put down. The way you write this is captivating, while the subject matter is so disturbing, and I just can't stop reading. You're so thorough with different angles of this subject and I wonder if it's related to your wor or studies, or research for this fic. Regardless it's so very well done, that if it was written differently I would ave given up a long time ago. 33 chapters is a long way to go for the slow progress Wisp has made (I mean that in a very respectful way) but I believe you have presented it in a very believable way. I hope you update again soon :) Oh, I've been wondering about their ages, and from a comment I gathered Edward is around 27 and we're assuming Wisp is 20 for now. How about the rest? Thanks.
| ooza chapter 33 . 11/19/2012
When is Edward gonna get better? I want more of him. *whines* At least let us get more of his suffering, lol.
And lock the door dammit!
Oh, Pet. We have to sharpen those claws a bit.
| AntiRebel chapter 33 . 11/19/2012
aww! what a cliff to leave us on. Ok just loving this story so much. it's so well written and just bril!
| oscarg chapter 33 . 11/19/2012
Wow, what a crazy ride! Can't wait for the next update!
| ClancyJane chapter 33 . 11/19/2012
Finally a chance to catch up...
Happy Birthday...make your case be yummy and the alcohol free :)
| CrazyLikeaBear chapter 33 . 11/19/2012
You have us a name! Gah! yayay! I'm loving this story, though I admit it seems difficult imagining Wisp ever becoming normal, let alone ending up with Edward. But I love the way you give us little clues here and there and the cliffies! I love/ hate those! Haha. Keep me coming back! Thanks for sharing this with us. I'm anxiously awaiting the next one!
| yippiekayay chapter 33 . 11/19/2012
gah! her name!
| Guest chapter 33 . 11/19/2012
wow such an emotional story can you imagine that there are actually people that have gone thru abuse like wisp has... Its just so sad and unimagineable!
| ocassye chapter 33 . 11/19/2012
Yeah, more information...I love it when we get somewhere. Can't wait til next time.
| lovelybluesky chapter 33 . 11/19/2012
How could you do this to ussssssss?! Meaaaaaan cliffie there!
Poor Wisp! I just wanna give her a huge hug!
I really, really, really, really can't wait to read the next chapter! Send me your work, i'll do it for you so you can write! LOL!
I can't wait!
Hope you have a lovely day!
| bitsofbits chapter 33 . 11/19/2012
OMG I HATE YOU
and that was awesome
BUT SRSLY WHY DID YOU DO THAT
| ticklemycookie chapter 33 . 11/19/2012
GAH they know her name! Yes! So this not only brought her out of her stupor but she revealed some things