Reviews for Wisp
yagalinus0420 chapter 14 . 12/2/2012
Guest chapter 34 . 12/2/2012
*sniffles* poor Wispy.

so is this why you made yourself sick and went to the hospital? so that you could do a "live" research for this chapter? It was packed with lots of big words. lol
ilive2read chapter 34 . 12/2/2012
poor little mite, I want to take care of her
JayJayxox chapter 34 . 12/2/2012
Love it! SO happily blissed out that you updated :)
motherbeatrice chapter 34 . 12/2/2012
well I hope you are over the malady that sent you to the hospital...
as always, this is so beautifully difficult to read, yes I know that doesn't make sense, but it does...
I think I will forget the futuretake for now, and just let things progress as you write them here...
love it.
I'm so glad that I was able to read the story of Isabella and her journey into hell...thank you for that...
paragod chapter 34 . 12/2/2012
You made my morning, well actually my whole day. Edward loves her so much and he's afraid to lose her now they are figuring who she is. Poor Edward. Please update soon. I need my Wisp fix.
ickaren chapter 34 . 12/2/2012
He is so unfailingly loving in his support and care for his Wisp. I love that she asks to remain just Wisp to him. Maybe she can believe that Wisp is good, even if Daddy told her Isabella was evil. So sad.
NT715 chapter 34 . 12/2/2012
I am loving this story!
tinaconnor chapter 34 . 12/2/2012
Thank you so much for the update. Sorry to hear that you were unwell and happy to hear that you are better. I was heartened to see that Wisp is coming to without the exaggerated trauma that I had expected. She needed to have Edward there to make that a possibility. You have woven a captivating story on an extremely difficult theme. Great job. The saddest part of this story is that out in the real world, this isn't fiction.
Guest chapter 34 . 12/2/2012
Of course c isnt evil. He wants a normal life for his son. Man this story is good but slow
anncarol chapter 34 . 12/2/2012
Poor little Wisp, poor big Edward.
However I think she has improved a little brought on by Edwards’s sickness causing her to act with necessity. The drama of having to look after Edward, in her own way, and her kitten has taken her out of herself and probably dormant instincts have kicked in.

BB Masen-Cullen chapter 34 . 12/2/2012
Eek! I'm soo excited that it updated! I hope that your all better from your visit in the hospital! And that Edward will be able to take Wisp home soon! I read the Futuretakes and I soo can't wait for the rest of this journey and hopefully something like the Futuretakes will happen in this story! :D
Barbr9 chapter 34 . 12/2/2012
WHAT? How can anyone think that Carlisle would be in cahoots with James? I can't even fathom how that logic was deduced. Oh well I guess everyone's mind works in different ways.
Love the update. They are finally making some progress. I am really worried what will happen if or when they find her true identity. I can't see Charlie trying to get back into her life but stranger things can happen. Maybe he had a change of heart and regrets what he did? Maybe be can be the key to reverse some of the damage to her. I highly doubt it but I will just have to see where you take this and how her recovery turns out.

agreen eyed girl chapter 34 . 12/2/2012
thank you so much for the update. hope you are feeling better now :)
LifeisNutty chapter 34 . 12/2/2012
Very interested to see where this will go. :)
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