|Reviews for Wisp|
| MK543 chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
Great progress & hope abounds. XO
| ShaeShae21 chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
This chapter was an awesome surprise.
Looks like Wisp is developing into more of a human. She's feeling things, even if Edward has no idea what. We also get to see more of her artistic talent, and I loved how you incorporated Garrett and his way of communicating with Wisp.
That picture...it makes me so sad and angry. Sad, because who knows what Wisp has had to endure. And angry, because no one should do that to another human being. That's evil in its truest form.
This story is really coming along, and I eagerly await the next update.
| oranqensaft chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
Awesome story! It just all seems soo real :x Can't wait to read more!
| jmrbear chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
I love this story but I've realized that I rarely review it. I think the intensity of the material leaves me feeling that my words would be insufficient to convey the way it affects me. It's heartbreaking to see all that she has suffered and yet heartwarming to see how he cares for her and about her. I am constantly impressed with the sensitivity that you manage to convey such horrendous abuses to the reader. It's a difficult tightrope to walk and you seem to be doing it very adeptly.
| Guest chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
Great chapter. I loved that Garrett was an older gentleman. Anyone younger would have been too intimidating for Bella.
| fannygilmore chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
Amazing what information Garrett was able to extract from her. I think he's much more empathetic than just an artist.
Edward's really making progress despite some minor shortfalls.
I love this story.
| amberkey chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
Wow! It's so awesome she actually drew his face!
| dreampills chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
great chapter. definite progress is made!
| pipelynn chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
Oh my so so sad. Liked Garrett. Having trouble understanding if wisp was trying yo say she was a bad pet to Edward?
| laurzxx chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
ooooooo dis is reali good, plz continue im reali into it xx
| sujari6 chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
She's making progress.
| MsHavisham79 chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
Wow, just wow. I am blown away that the drawing is how they are going to be able to discover more.
I wonder if the purpose of Garrett being old is because he might have known someone connected to her a long time ago?
Edwards internal struggle is going to drive him crazy but I understand why he thinks no one would understand his actions, he is running on pure instinct.
| ooza chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
OMG *so* good. No words. I'm glad Garrett could speak her language. Also, I really wonder what was going on in her head the night before. If she was offering herself to Edward or if she thought she had to. Cat food incident went much better than I was expecting.
I'm very curious about her sleeping on the foot of his bed. And then again with the trying to… whatever her intentions were. I wonder if she's relieved by his refusals or confused. I haven't read the BPOV outtake because I didn't want to know ahead of time, and also I'm kind of skeered. But I am totally going to start bribing you to write more, lol.
I live that Edward keeps going back to question his behavior, because honestly it's probably not "right" but it's Edward so not hard to read. I wonder how/if his feelings will change to romantic/sexual and how he will deal with that.
I also wonder how much of what they say Wisp can understand. Does she have a limited vocabulary or is her unresponsiveness part of her personality. Or maybe it's easier for her just not to listen. Ack! I have all the questions!
| CerealReader chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
I love Garret. I also think he'd be a great therapist for wisp cuz he can actually talk to her through his pictures
| sujari6 chapter 15 . 7/15/2012
He's treading such a difficult path here.