|Reviews for Wisp|
| ilive2read chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
I am aching for her, just horrified. Poor girl.
| mrsedwardcullen73ca chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
addicted to this fanfic! sooo good! dont keep us waiting long!
| mrsm0803 chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
I'm continually blown away by this story. Wow. My heart broke when she turned away from Edward. Garrett is lovely and I'm excited that he was able to get Wisp to draw about her past. Poor girl. Lots of Edward hugs are just what she needs. His internal struggle to stay focused and not blur the lines is so interesting to read. Thanks for the update.
| MiaLuthor chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
Thank you so uch for thischapter. I check twice a day for updates. When Wisp said"Bad," she whispered. "Edward, bad. Pet." was she saying that the man was bad or that she was bad?
Thank you so , Mia
| aliceinthemiddle chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
Hoooooolleeeeeee CRAP Batman! Great job Cris; seriously. I have two daughters 28 and 17; when I look at them knowing what I do about human trafficking,slavery and how women/girls/CHILDREN are treated in many parts of this world on a daily basis, it's all I can do not to scream at the top of my lungs to MAKE IT STOP! Anyone who says there is no true evil in the world is wrong wrong wrong. I just hope that the faceless man is named (I did read Wisp's back story and it did not spoil it for me but I don't want to spoil it for anyone else) and caught. :(
Now I'm off to read a less angsty tale. lol.
| motherbeatrice chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
loved it, yes I guess there would be a reason he had to be old, for her to trust him maybe? I can't guess.
Love this story so much as sad as it is...
| weedstert chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
Garrett is my hero...such an intensely sad but encouraging chapter..this is a great story :)
| Mercyrus chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
This story rips me inside out...
I love it...I really do...it's difficult to read...but, it's full of feelings...not just words...
It's phenomenally written...
| ReBernardi chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
Oh poor girl...
I loved this Garrett... :)
| divyvicki chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
Great great chapter. This is a fantastic story. I'm on pins and needles waiting for more.
| savannavansmutsmut chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
I wonder if Rose knows him
| DreamerRoad chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
Great job with this chapter. I am impressed by how realistic you've made this for Edward, a lot of Edward's are so perfect that they wouldn't be conflicted with their feelings/intent towards this girl. His reaction seems very normal, and all that matters is that, though conflicted, he remains the gentleman that he seems to be.
And, the whole interaction with Garrett was very interesting.
| lionola chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
Great chapter, love it!
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| 2brown-eyes chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
Does Rose recognize the person? Wisp has so much talent.