Reviews for Wisp
teamswitzerlandmom chapter 30 . 11/1/2012
Wonderful chapter. Edward is definitely in need of the break and it is time to get some professional help, he just needs to be careful who he picks. Poor Wisp just doesn't understand what to do and how to break the habits she has had drilled into her head by those sick monsters. And the only way that she knows to make Edward happy is through sexual means. At least that is what I think with my extremely limited knowledge is psychology. Looking forward to reading more soon. And wish I could be there in Chicago in June but I don't think it will happen. Have a few drinks for me. :)
Moflo19 chapter 30 . 10/31/2012
This chapter was one of the hardest to read. :"( It is definitely time for Edward to get professional help, not only for Wisp but for himself as well. Please please please update soon.
twiannfav chapter 30 . 10/31/2012
thanks for the update xxx
barbarito chapter 30 . 10/31/2012
Oh no!
DerFlash chapter 5 . 10/31/2012
you better believe she needs to stay there! the whole never seen a woman thing was heart-breaking. poor girl. great chapter.

-dan
robyn odei-ntiri chapter 30 . 10/31/2012
wow thank you for the update...I hope Edward finds a good therapist that can unlock Wisp mind...very good..well done!
Paaameeelaaa chapter 30 . 10/31/2012
thank you so much!
it was amazing!
im so worried about wisp!
and i have a question ...does she has a period?
thank you so much!
see ya!
bellastew chapter 30 . 10/31/2012
:((
J.D. Wolf chapter 30 . 10/31/2012
Great chapter. It is time for Edward to bring in a shrink. He needs the professional help just as much as Wisp, but for different reasons. He needs the professional support and advise. And poor Wisp. She probably thinks she's getting back into his good graces or something.
DerFlash chapter 4 . 10/31/2012
wow that was awesome and still intense and HEART-BREAKING! poor bella's never seen another female before. wow. i can't even fathom that kind of situation. makes me so sad that things like this have probably happened before.

-dan
Edwards littel Pixxy chapter 30 . 10/31/2012
its really getting good! Im really loving this story (-)
Milk40 chapter 30 . 10/31/2012
Wow, what a turn of events. I wasn't expecting it...
melissamary55 chapter 30 . 10/31/2012
really good chapter and what is going on with wisp and will she be back to normal soon
Guest chapter 30 . 10/31/2012
Is this seriously a B/E story? Cause I have to tell you I just read all 30 chapters and the last one made me sick. Edward is letting a girl that has been severely sexually abused sleep with him and several other things that are just wrong. She shouldn't be there. Bella is practically acting as a cavewoman/dog with no comprehension of right and wrong. How in the world you would consider getting these 2 together is beyond me. Is she gonna have some miraculous recovery? Be able to function as a normal person. I don't see it. I actually find it abusive of Edward to keep her there with him. She's become comfortable with him and she thinks it's okay to give him a blow job cause that's the only damn way she knows how to show anything because that's all she's known for so long. And she probably figures he'll keep her around because of it. For once, I don't, no, I can't see these 2 together. And somebody needs to take her out of there. Preferably a woman.
DerFlash chapter 3 . 10/31/2012
wow. that is intense. in a lot of ways. intense emotions, intense abuse, obviously, too. wowza. seems like james, perhaps with victoria, had a little slave girl that they treated like an animal. yeesh. poor girl. looking forward to see what emmett and carlisle find out. and seeing alice with her.

-dan
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