|Reviews for Wisp|
| Heatherl8367 chapter 9 . 6/28/2012
Ooooooh! She speaks. What a powerful chapter. LOVED!
| dragonfly336 chapter 11 . 6/27/2012
Really enjoying this so far!
| Hotaru83 chapter 11 . 6/27/2012
I really like this story, you are doing a great job..
| Sophiepicklegirl chapter 11 . 6/27/2012
So Bella can draw huh? Hope she can draw what's been going on in her life and what is on the piece of paper that Jasper picked up, hmmm?
Just so's you know, I've just discovered this story and have been compelled to read all the chapters in one hit - fabulous and gripping stuff, well done and keep typing!
| Love M Go Blue chapter 11 . 6/27/2012
This is an abso-frigging-lutely amazing story! I wish I could tell you where I heard about it - I know some authors like to thank others in their A/Ns for sending new readers their way or whatever - but I honestly don't know. I just keep this hand-written list and read them when I can get to them, you know? Thing is, I don't write down where I found the recc. Sorry.
Anyhoo . . . I have to compliment you on the literal lack of even one grammatical error thus far in this story - a rarity even in good ole' fashioned "real" published books. A couple of typos - though they "looked like" the kind that are FFn's fault (all the formatting weirdness that happens and such) not yours.
I look so forward to seeing this story unveiled. I've read (and currently read) a frigg-ton of Twific, and I can honestly say that I haven't been this excited over a new (to me) story in a REALLY long time! And I'm DYING to go read Wisp's backstory on TWCS but will force myself not to, despite the fact that I, too, am a last-page-reader every once in a while. ;)
| NCChris chapter 11 . 6/27/2012
Sorry for only just now reviewing but I was so engrossed that I read straight through to Ch 11! What a wonderfully complex plot you've created...I'm so intrigued to see where you go with it next. Do you have a social work background? Just wondering as that's my background and I'm also working on a public health/healthcare admin master's degree. I've noticed that it seemed that you knew quite a bit about process and theory, so I just wondered if it was something you researched for the story or if it was your professional or educational background. Anyway, I am really enjoying the story and excited to read more!
| Heatherl8367 chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Holy crap. To say I'm intrigued would be an understatement! Very interesting. Xx
| mrsm0803 chapter 11 . 6/26/2012
Edward is such a beautiful soul. Can't wait to see what Bella has drawn.
| FL Sunshine chapter 11 . 6/26/2012
A friend rec'd your story to me, i amkooked got to figure out poor wisp. added to alerts and favs
| mrsm0803 chapter 9 . 6/26/2012
Omg she said his name! Good for Edward fighting for her.
| mtneer05 chapter 11 . 6/26/2012
I am loving this story! Sorry I haven't reviewed, but I was sucked into it. I haven't read the story on TWCS, but I think it was one of those situations where James treated her like a dog or a cat. As far as to how long is another question. It was obviously long enough to make her forget how she should normally act. I'm excited to see where you take this. Especially with her drawing.
| Twlightforever chapter 11 . 6/26/2012
Just found your story it is excellent. I am glad that there will be no romance. To me this seems to be a story about healing.
| Erikajo chapter 6 . 6/26/2012
Fingers crossed they let her stay.
| Erikajo chapter 5 . 6/26/2012
Slow and steady will win the race for little Wisp. :)
| Erikajo chapter 4 . 6/25/2012
This is really something.