Reviews for Wisp
BridieM chapter 16 . 2/2
Do trust you. Garrett was a pleasant surprise. I'm hoping the other man is not her father. Excellent chapter. :D
BridieM chapter 15 . 2/2
Wow. Hard work. Rewarding when it goes right. Excellent chapter. :D
BridieM chapter 13 . 2/2
Wish I had a parent like Carlisle. Guess they are few and far between. :) Excellent chapter. :D
BridieM chapter 11 . 2/1
Loving the interactions between the main characters. Loved the whole 'bet' joke. Also how everybody has tried to keep things from Carlisle. Loved it. So glad Wisp is home. :D
BridieM chapter 10 . 2/1
I feel for Edward. He's honourable intentions could so easily be misconstrued be those who 'know best'. Excellent chapter. :D
BridieM chapter 9 . 2/1
I I couldn't bring myself to review last chapter simply because I was so concerned about Wisp. Thank you bring a modicum of peace in this chapter. :D
BridieM chapter 7 . 2/1
Well it's easy to be angered by self important, controlling (government) people. It is easy to feel you have no control. Goodness imagine how Wisp feels. Another excellent chapter. Procrastination has well and truly set in! ;P
BridieM chapter 6 . 2/1
Don't know what else to say except 'excellent chapter. Totally readable. Compelling.' :D
BridieM chapter 5 . 2/1
Thanks for setting me straight on the language thing. Excellent chapter. You're right about Rosalie and her shield of armour. ;D
BridieM chapter 4 . 2/1
Alice can be subtle! Obviously! ;P

Excellent chapter. I can't put this down. :D
BridieM chapter 3 . 2/1
I am very moved by this story. I can't help wonder if this is loosely based on real events/circumstances/case study or a work of fiction. I understand from some very limited reading I've done that the ability to speak and understand language is presented at a very early age in a baby's development. ? Also was Carlisle made aware of the discomfort Wisp experienced at washing/rubbing between her legs? Anyhow I am touched by all the characters (except James of course) and their compassion for Wisp.
BridieM chapter 2 . 2/1
A good chapter. It is good that she allows a man to touch her. :)
BridieM chapter 1 . 2/1
A really good start and an even better climax. Wow. :D
ecdreams chapter 53 . 2/1
So curious where this is going with Tanya and how the investigation can move forward with James dead. Can't wait for more.
Anita chapter 53 . 1/29
You're back! Hope all is well. Thank you for this, as always, great chapter.
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