|Reviews for Wisp|
| Mels78 chapter 53 . 1/23
Ah so happy to see these guys again. Great job. Cannot wait for more :)
| Sbf1966 chapter 53 . 1/23
You are a phenomenal writer! Your words, your pacing, your plot, everything.
| Hitchy chapter 53 . 1/23
So glad that Wisp is back! I missed these two. Really nice to see Edward and Tanya party as friends, too. N:-) Thanks for posting
| tulips3 chapter 53 . 1/23
I was so worried that something was going
to happen when Edward left. Both at the
house and with Edward. He needs to lock the door during the day as well and I know he needed a break to get out with an adult but... that was hard to read. Tough situation with Em and Rose. Not really enjoying Tanya in the picture at all and I think Wisp won't either. Wondering what her reaction will be. If the phone call is any indication it will only upset her. I don't think he is thinking clearly. Does Edward really think this will go well?
Are you going to have him get involved with her again?! I'm so sad. :(
| natalayx chapter 53 . 1/23
A massage therapist... Skanky? LOL what the hell? Who on earth would think that? Massage therapists are amazeballs. Especially ones who give remedial massages! Hahaha.
This chapter was so sweet! I hope they find the murderer soon! And that Rose and Edward will make up. And I like Tanya! I had a feeling she was going to turn all hippy-like. Haha. Hopefully Wisp likes her! But she's a bit possessive of Edward, so there's a possibility that she might not warm to her haha
| fannygilmore chapter 53 . 1/23
It will be very interesting to see Wisp's reaction to Edwards girl friend.
Thanks. I sincerely hope you are well.
| CentauRita chapter 53 . 1/23
The massage was good, therapeutic even...But, Edward got the Hug he desperately needed and deserved. ;D
Interesting...Home, is no longer...the City.
Enjoyed the update...Thanks!
| ALiveTodaytoWrite chapter 53 . 1/22
Great work especially great chapter not that are not all well written this one just seemed even more so can't wait to see what is next and how Tanya's visit goes haha.
| cjrich chapter 53 . 1/22
Wonderful chapter. I agree with little Wisp, Edward is home right where he belongs. I know some people call this story dark, but how can they not see how sweet Wisp is? The love between these two, not sexual love (at this point) but unselfish, unconditional caring and love. Regardless of how it has started this story always leaves me with a smile and hope. Thank you. XOXO, Cheri
| tas62 chapter 53 . 1/22
Thanks for the update. Something tells me that Wisp won't like Tanya's visit at all.
| sparklymagpie chapter 53 . 1/22
Loved Edward having some adult time. Think he is wrong about how he is dealing with R&E but I hope he figures it out soon. Love seeing you update . Hope all is well with you.
| sassy41 chapter 53 . 1/22
seems edward needed the much adult time
things will get there. one step forward and two steps back
| ALiveTodaytoWrite chapter 52 . 1/22
| musicnlyrics chapter 53 . 1/22
The whole situation is just not happy, but I have faith. More bad things are sure to come, but I also have no doubt that good things are also on the horizon.
Thanks for sharing! I can't wait to see what happens next.
| Edlovesme chapter 53 . 1/22
Massage therapist are miracle workers. But there are always those in the bunch that ruin it for everyone. Im looking forward to Tanya coming, I have a feeling they might get a little headway. Thanks so much for the update. Always wish I could saver the chapters, I dont want them to end.