|Reviews for Element bender|
| Dog chapter 30 . 3/14
This story is good! I look forward to the next update!
| Can You Feel My Heart-BMTH chapter 30 . 3/11
:O dafuq, Tobi?
Sorry I didn't read and review sooner, the wifi on my iPod went out so I had to wait for my sister to come over from spring break. :/ The good news, though, I was able to finally finish a anything! I finished the first chapter of my first fanfiction that wasn't the stupidest thing that I've ever thought of in my entire life! :D Though it's still pretty sucky in my opinion. I feel like not only does it suck, but it's way too short. I posted it here and wattpad and so far, all together, I have two reviews, one says, "wow thats actually really good" which made me feel all special and the other... DX " its aight i guess. short kind confusing and s***. p.s. dont make it an impreg. thats just weird..." I'm seriously copy and pasting here, dude. :(
Enough about my boring crap, and on with the review! One words: CLIFFHANGER. We have a very love-hate relationship. I love it, but its driving me insane. xp I hope Tobi acts like Tobi most of the time instead of his fucking, "Oh, I don't care that Deidara's dead," Obito shit. I love Obito, but that just reeeaaally pissed me off.
STUPID. FUCKING. MOTIVATION. Oh yea, motivation, it was totally the coolest thing you could ever do, just abandoning one of my favorite authors, that was totally what I want you to do. I'm serious, first you abandon me, then you leave HER? FUCKING FANTASTIC. Seriously though, I was really unmotivated it took me like all day just to finish reading this one Erwin x Levi story!and then i almost couldn't read yours cuz i just wanted to sleep but I couldn't get to sleep no matter how hard i tried. I tried to watch an hour long interview of sleeping with sirens and pierce the veil, took me like five hours just to sit there and watch them in all their hilarious sexiness. I could barely make it through Andy and CC (Black Veil Brides) reading fifty shades of grey out loud. ANDY WAS READING SOMETHING AND IT WAS A BUNCH OF DIRTY TALK. HOW IS IT POSSIBLE THAT I COULD POSSIBLY NOT HAVE MOTIVATION TO SIT THERE AND LISTEN TO THAT? HOW? Just last night and today, it was difficult to sit there and listen to music. How is that even hard?!
Aw, I have to say, I for one will miss the preview, and weekly updates. :/
All my heart, .:xXoOBellaOoXx:.
| CitrusFlag chapter 30 . 3/11
Oh my god! Please don't leave! It's okay if you don't do the preview thing anymore but don't leave TTTT They're so close to being reunited! And I would really miss your stories :'(
| SallyStitches13 chapter 29 . 3/8
Epic chapter! Please update soon!
| CitrusFlag chapter 29 . 2/26
Gahh! Who said that?! O_O
| Can You Feel My Heart-BMTH chapter 29 . 2/22
GODDANGIT TOBI. : Just let your senpai go around and do his flippin buiseness. Chew suck right now... BUTS I STILL LOVE YOOOOOOOOOU, TOOOOOBBBIIIIII! I don't even know what's going on in my head anymore... :
I was really happy to see you updated, this weeks been going by really slowly, and I'm not quite sure why. Like, maybe it's because track started so ive been having to get up early and go to school earlier than I usually do...? I don't know...
I don't really mind him being a bad guy though. I like seeing a different variety on the roles different characters play in fanfictions. Keeps it interesting. :)
All my love,
| Guest chapter 29 . 2/22
How comes you use (')apostrophes(') instead of (")quotation marks(") to show when someone is speaking? You're supposed to use (")quotation marks.(")
| SallyStitches13 chapter 28 . 2/12
Kisame seems like a buttmunch...
I'm sure he has good intentions though.
I hope Sasori finds Deidara! (But I'm secretly wishing that Dei falls for 'Tachi...)
| CitrusFlag chapter 28 . 2/12
I'm so glad this has turned out to be a longer fic, I can't wait to see how it ends :)
| Can You Feel My Heart-BMTH chapter 28 . 2/11
Can I just say I'm loving your story?
Cuz I am. :
I have no idea why but this chapter made me really happy. I think it's probably because the mentioned Hidan, or if I think he'll be in the next chapter, but I'm too happy to care! :D (it's probably just because that's my OTP but I still think Hidan and Deidara make a perfect couple in this story. IT'S JUST SO FLOPPIN' CUTE.) But Itachi is defenatly who he needs to end up with since it's not gonna be Hidan. :/ I find that for once I'm not actually all that sad about it. I REALLY can't wait until Itachi comes back into the story! Would you be willing to say which chapter he comes up in, or no? Cuz I missssss himmmmm!
| SallyStitches13 chapter 27 . 2/5
Poor Sasori :( he's going to be so disappointed! He deserves it though, the Baka hates 'Tachi. Preview please?
| Can You Feel My Heart-BMTH chapter 27 . 2/2
Ok, I defiantly need a preview this time! There was no converstation in this chapter... But hey I know there will be some next chapter!
Getting a bit dramatic! :D I love drama!
This chapter was pretty much just Sasori, and I feel like it was a whole lot shorter than your other chapters. :/
But then again, I always think they're shorter because I'm expecting it to be super long for some reason. Maybe it's because, I started reading this later on, so you'd already had quite a few chapters done, and I just thought the chapters were longer than they actually were... I don't know...
| CitrusFlag chapter 27 . 2/2
*u* I can't wait till Sasori sees that Deidara left! Ahh, this is gonna be good! :D And was that perhaps a bit of foreshadowing there with Deidara having awesome leadership qualities? o_O (I'm pretty hyper so I don't even know right now).
| SallyStitches13 chapter 26 . 1/26
This story is epic! but kinda sad... Poor Dei :/
Can I get a preview? Please? .
| CitrusFlag chapter 26 . 1/26
This was good :) I'm just wondering when you plan on bringing Sasori back into the story. :