|Reviews for Of Storks and Grims|
| mistressofcliche chapter 1 . 5/27
This was haunting and dark - and very, very interesting. That was a nice twist you used with the ritual. I didn't see that coming, nor that the culprit would be Snape. Good job spinning a most believable tale and thanks for writing it in the first place! Gem's like this are what keep me coming back to . Definitely putting this in my favorites.
| Katalyna chapter 1 . 9/16/2014
That was creepy. In a completely wow factor sort of way. Rather interesting story idea...! I'm quite floored.
| expiry 4.23 chapter 1 . 5/17/2014
I got chills. Brilliantly written.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
A very unique twist on horcrux removal... Thanks for posting.
| OMEGA2ALPHA chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
this was slightly disturbing to read. good plot and all but still disturbing.
| X-elemental chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
As far as short stories go, this is the first time I've read sth like this.
| HP-fanfic-fan101 chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Absolute brilliance and totally creepy. Extremely interesting and unique way to kill Voldemort. I once had the thought of what it would be like if all the horcruxes were turned into independant beings, it just seems so hard on Severus since this whole plan was his idea and I feel like he is going to end up dead as a result of whatever spell he used to accomplish this task. (Whatever Harry is feeling doesn't bother me since this seems no different that if it were a still birth, don't know how he got so attached so fast but I've never been pregnant so I wouldn't know I guess.)
| Jedi Master Albus chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
Okaaaay, That was incredibly weird, dark and pretty much freaked me out... I have to admit that the alien-embryo-implant thing gave me a vivid image of the baby bursting from Harry and yeah... pretty good one-shot though...
| Kittani chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Wow. As a mother of two children I can't help but shudder at the thought of that happening to either of my girls, but the way you wrote that was amazing. I didnt know that it was Snape until the very end, and when I first read that he had killed the baby I was horrified, but I guess he did to it for the better good. Still, poor Harry.
Well done, that was an amazing story. As always I cant wait for another of your creations.
| MuggleCreator chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
Woah... Cool stuff.
Couldn't they have exorcised the badness out of the soul?
Hmm... Can't stop thinking about that now...
Sixth year would've been different either way...
And he'd already become attached to it...
| 11-Dino chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
I really should put you on my author alert list (note: tag the button). So I apologize for only finding, reading and reviewing the story now. So you did it mpreg. Not a big fan so I was hesistant but you are awesome so your awesomeness won. And boy am I glad. That was brilliant and cruel. You know I figured that the attack was 'friendly' but that Snape did it to get Voldemort piece of soul out of Harry never crossed my mind. And I can't decide if I should hate or love him for it because it was one of the cruelest thing but I loved that Snape wasn't a puppet of Dumbledore and I cheered him on as he was like: Take that old man. Your ridicilous plan to let Harry let himself be killed is out of the question. (that was cruel of Dumbledore) So you know we have the saying: "genie und wahnsinn" means something like "genius and crazy" that applies well to both of them. The story was different but even so I was hesistant you won me over and I can't imagine how you even had the idea of writing something like that.
| katenkapotter chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
oooh completely unnerving
| deanine chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
Creepy. But good. :D
| Johnnyseattle chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
That is so ridiculously messed up, but awesome at the same rime. I thought it was probably Snape that did it, but i never saw that coming. Brilliant work as always.
| the good dr chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
That's twisted, and this is coming from a guy who laughed at Cupcakes.
signed the good dr.