Reviews for Son of Xerxes
Kingdom of Zetalnarury chapter 1 . 2/20/2021
3rd time I've reread this fic, and it's still great! The mystery is really compelling, and I love how in character everyone is :) I will keep on hoping it gets updated one day! Hope you are doing ok!
SirchSidhe chapter 14 . 1/1/2021
This was an interesting and very intriguing story. Thanks for sharing it.
Rev chapter 14 . 7/12/2019
Huh, I didn’t expect Edward to become a different person. This story is very interesting, I hope you continue!
edwin gremlin chapter 11 . 11/27/2018
ehehehehehEHEHEHHWHWWHHEE kiss

also sad hohenheim nnOOOOO
rcwak chapter 1 . 11/27/2018
Oh, wow. This is really cool! I like the worldbuilding stuff showing up here, Ed's poorly thought out but reasonable actions (no accidentally-cutting-yourself-on-the-arcane-artifact scene here!) and really just this writing in general. Thank you for writing. Can't wait to see where this goes! :)
Jo chapter 14 . 8/1/2018
I'm reading this four years later, but I have to admit, this is probably one of the best fullmetal fanfics I've ever read! It has all the elements of a well-written story, and I would really love to see the outcome;; This chapter was such a cliffhanger! It's so intriguing, but provides enough information to draw your own conclusions. The characters are always on point. It's great, really. I love your story so much!
Rick K'Tish chapter 14 . 5/21/2018
This is fascinating, and I hope you find the motivaation and inspiration and time to update soon.
TheFullmetalRaven chapter 1 . 5/7/2018
Just gonna throw in a little support here, hope you're doing well! Looking forward to future chapters! I hope motivation and inspiration find you and writing goes smoothly!
LokiTyv chapter 2 . 1/30/2018
This fanfic is amazing! You have got me hooked and I cannot wait to find out more!
Where is Ed being taken? Who are the mysterious bandits? Do Mustang and crew save Edward in time? What happened when Ed touched the slap?
Find out in the next chapters of "Son of Xerxes"!
- LokiTyv
I'm only theorizing here, so bear with me, but what if the alchemy removed his Elric DNA, and made him a full blooded Xerxian?
LeChick chapter 14 . 8/18/2017
Damn! We were just getting to the good part!
LeChick chapter 12 . 8/17/2017
Mustang is such a badass
LeChick chapter 9 . 8/17/2017
I love Roy in this
love2read555 chapter 14 . 8/6/2016
please update
CupcakePride101 chapter 14 . 2/7/2016
This story is so interesting OMG! I wanna know what's up with Ed ever since he activated a Xerxian-only ray. Whatever it is, it seems to be really bad.
The plot for the story is especially very interesting! Like, why are those guys targeting Ed (and possibly his family)?
i really like that little plot twist of Hohenheim giving up his alchemy and souls for Al's body, rather than Ed giving up his alchemy. I wonder what prompted him to make that decision tho, especially since Ed didn't want Hohenheim to do something like that. At least he's still alive! (For now, at least).

Seeing that you didn't upload for more than a year made me kinda sad TBH. But if you're busy irl, then I do wish you great luck! I hope you could update the story one day, tho!
Night Phoenix Whisper chapter 14 . 10/16/2015
Update soon, it's pretty interesting
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