kinllover chapter 3 . 6/24/2012
Lol pit couldn't ask more than five questions a day XD Hehehehehe :-) nice nice work!
Xybur7 chapter 3 . 5/31/2012
3rd paragraph from the bottom, "their companion dazed BY the blow" it says "y" Careful of spelling errors. It's good, and very funny!

Thank you!
TaKa9842 chapter 2 . 5/3/2012
I'm gonna go ahead and guess that it is Japanse.I'm really sure my anyway,the next chapter is gonna be hardcore.
Xybur7 chapter 2 . 4/29/2012
I wonder... would that 'unintelligible language' happen to be Japanese, hmm? Very exciting second part. Good job!
Xybur7 chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
Hahaha! Very funny. I bet a lot of people wanted to do that to Slippy. And also...

It say 'Yoshi', lets call it 'Yoshi'! Perfect name, right?

I like it. Keep going.
TaKa9842 chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
Of course
Juni chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
I liked it. Are you excepting ocs?