|Reviews for Heart Crafting|
| snowflowersister of toshiro241 chapter 11 . 4/30/2013
| Noctivaga chapter 5 . 4/22/2013
Hmm . . . very interesting. I have a feeling that a lot of stuff is yet to be revealed and that the king and his brother are still withholding some vital information. My logic behind this statement is that at this point, we still do not know what Tetsuya's position is, or the real point of him being there is, because guarding the king doesn't seem like a big enough deal to bring him into the fold the way they did. I cannot wait to read more and find out what is really going on. And I like the plot twist that there might be a traitor among the many faces Tetsuya has already encountered or will soon encounter. I wonder who it will be.
Also, I am still warming up to Renji and Byakuya, but I like progress. Renji is hilarious!
| Noctivaga chapter 4 . 4/21/2013
Ah. I'm so happy after reading this chapter and I can't put my finger on why. I think it was mostly because of the Byakuya and Renji scene. Though I am also starting to pull for Tetsuya and Hiromi as well. I have a guess as to what the king might not be saying, but I guess I'll see soon enough if I am right or wrong. (:
Onward I read! And great chapter. I like the introduction Tetsuya had.
| Noctivaga chapter 3 . 4/20/2013
Ah. I think I see where this is going . . . with Tetsuya and Hiromi. (;
I liked this chapter! It was very back-story rich. And I particularly like the idea about the heir to the throne creating souls that will be important later and releasing them into the world. That was very good. I am also intrigued by the story about the originators of the nobles and Hajime. I want to know more! I have a feeling the past might be a bit more connected to the present than maybe what Tetsuya may currently realize.
Anyway, I will faithfully be moving on to the next chapter and am excited to read more.
| Noctivaga chapter 2 . 4/19/2013
First, thank you for the PM. (: Authors that actually respond to their readership are just plain awesome.
And secondly, I decided that I am going to slow down and try to read this more slowly to savor it. Which means one chapter a day, though I doubt I'll be able to limit myself like that. Anyway, I can try.
This was a great continuation! I like the two different stories going on at once. I confess myself to be actually opening up to the Byakuya and Renji pairing, which is something I haven't tried before. I usually ship Byakuya with others like Azien or Ichigo. But this ship might be another one to add to my list because of this fic. Also, I actually like your OC character Tetsuya. I'm not sure exactly if he is going to be paired with anyone, but I think my money is on one of the two royal siblings if that were to even happen.
Anyway, I like where this is going and cannot wait to read more. (:
| Noctivaga chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
Just found this story, and though I'm only a chapter in, I have a feeling it is going to be amazing! So far the set up is wonderful: Byakuya and Tetsuya's close relationship, Byakuya and Renji's relationship, and now these two royal siblings enter the picture. I can't wait to read more! I'm hoping by the time I reach the most recent chapter you will have updated but given my ability to devour fics I really like at an alarming rate, I have a feeling I'm going to be subjected to some major disappointment.
So far, a strong start!
| kyuumihaira chapter 11 . 4/17/2013
Omg Katsu what is going on with you! Tetsuya... You can handle it! Please get Byakuya pregnant Renji!
| EmbersofImagination chapter 11 . 4/16/2013
I'm a new reader of your's. As in I recently found some of your works about . . . three days ago and I confess to be whipping through them. They are brilliant! Though I have to admit this one in particular is my favorite.
I haven't really been into Bleach for years now and stopped watching after season one. But one of my favorite author's on this site recommend some of your work. They were right. I actually am able to enjoy the fandom again through your work. (:
While I am deeply enjoying the Byakuya / Renji arch. I think Tetsuya / Hiromi stole the show. I'd love to see a lot more of them and their development. And Katsu is also an intriguing character I'd also like to see more, and after reading some of your author notes I'm curious to who his possible love interest could be. I have feeling that if he has one, it is probably going to have a twist, like the demon-thingy (sorry for the terminology but I cannot remember what you called it at the moment) or someone unexpected like Ichigo.
Anyway. I am in love with this story and hope you update again soon! (
| dragonprincess01 chapter 11 . 4/14/2013
I had to re-read the story up to this point because I had completely forgotten the story line. I am looking forward to the next chapter and how the show down with the demon will play out. Thanks for sharing this newest chapter with us. Hope you have or had depending on when you read this a nice weekend.
| Firebirdever chapter 11 . 4/13/2013
Very good chapter, cant wait to find more of the history behind Katsu and this demon. Poor Tetsuya, hope Hiromi will be there for him.
And, even if Renji are not really ready, its would be so great to see Tetsuya and Byakuya be pregnant together (gawd, im so perveted) Hihihi
| bijective and invertible chapter 11 . 4/12/2013
I finally took time out to read this story. :) Last few chapters I was wondering why Katsu seemed to dislike Tetsuya and this chapter answers the question. He is just trying to be protective of Tetsuya and Hiromi because he doesn't want his brother to feel the same pain he did by losing Tetsuya. I really love this and I am glad Tetsuya got a new chance with Naoki i.e, Hiromi. I also hope that demon doesn't get his hands on Tetsuya that would be awful. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
| Anelir-sensei chapter 11 . 4/11/2013
OMG! I have been waiting for this for...forever! I love this one so much...not sure why, but I do :) I can't wait for more. Tetsuya and Hiromi are adorable, they seem to make the perfect couple somehow. 3
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/22/2012
8D I am very happy with this chapter, lol. I have to say, I was begining to feel bad for Hiromi. Tetsuya was having his inner turmoil and he was kind of being ignored and pushed away I think they could both do with a hug.
Can't wait to read the next chapter! 3
| Tomyallen chapter 10 . 7/20/2012
Awww...that was a really sweet chapter. Poor tetsuya going thru that torment before Hiromi could explain it all to him. At least he returns his feelins to Hiromi. That demon though...I know we will be seeing more of it soon. And Hooray for Byakuya and Renji being in the spirit kingdom. Lol, i think it was kinda funny that it wasn't the first thing to come out of tetsuya's mouth "where is Byakuya?"
Good job! Keep up the great work.
| Miyuko-Matsuda chapter 10 . 7/20/2012
interesting chapter. also I was wanting a TetsuyaXNaoki fic (one where he lives sorta thing,..this is good too). can't wait to see more