|Reviews for What Happens in Hell|
| Tazael chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
Being my absolutely first lemon I dared to read (in the middle of the night on my tiny smartphone's screen), I found it absolutely hilarious. Graphic for my virgin and innocent tastes but screw it. xD
| sweetkitten20 chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
Oh yus. More!
| Animefreak1145 chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
Forget about what i said in 'Fee Fye Foe Fum',I wasn't aware you made this yet...And by the way..*clears throat* good job! :D
| chocoholic123 chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
wkwk. pervy sebby. liked it.
| AB12 chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
I'd pay so much money to be in Sam's place it isn't even funny.
And from my opinion, it's hard to think that this was your first Lemon when it's this good.
*fangirls over Sebastian for a bit then calms down*
Anywhore, This Is AB12 Signing Off... The Future Is In The Past, Onward Aoshima!
| aaliyah chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
this is fucking sexy good job
| Rain Dropz Of Poison chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
I feel dirty now, it was AWESOME! And the end was too funny!
| wolf girl 4797 chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
it wasn't bad for your first lemon
| Eruza Sukaretto chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
The Round Two part made me laugh. HAHAHA. :)
| InuBakaGirl chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
absolutely loved it
| KuroKoneko1 chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
Bro. Love. This. Lemon.
| yokishko chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Haha it wasn't terrible, sure it wasn't as explicit as usual lemons tend to be but at least the actual dialogue had some sense and even humor to it.
Rather than the excessive and utterly unnecessary onomatopoeias in a lot of other lemons. (Like the author would have typed "she screamed" then put an "AAAHHH" after it or vise versa, it's annoying sometimes.)
| SmileandMoveOn chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
I rather liked it. It wasn't as bad as some I've stumbled across... suffice to say, I liked this one much better ;;
| Kaitlyn Trancy chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
I really hope you take this as a compliment, because that's how I mean this-
I started reading this at 3:45 in the morning and burst out laughing when she asked, "Is this it?" My mom and stepfather came into my room looking extremely pissed off at me and asked what I was laughing about. I made them read this. For a while, they just stood there with confused faces. When they got to the end, it was a look that said 'I'm going to murder you in your sleep if you don't start acting like a normal teenage girl and obsess over shoes and lipgloss instead of anime'
| Hasunohana chapter 1 . 11/4/2012