Reviews for Untitled
WhisperedMuse chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
Nice, I get why you think it's vague but I think that's part of its beauty. Gaz is almost living in a haze, everything to him at that point isn't sharp, it's blurry and waffly (not that this is waffly - far from it actually.) I think you've done really well at emulating his headspace, which often feels funny when you write it, but when I write like that I always feel like it's crap. But it's not, it was beautiful. Also - love that it bridges together Thessaly's fics as opposed to a moment in the musical, because her fics are pretty special.


PS - Found my one-shot, will be finishing it soonish!