Reviews for Vivian Antionette Blanch
RachelDawson chapter 16 . 2/10/2013
That is really awesome story :) Can't wait for another chapters.
Slytherin Studios chapter 12 . 9/24/2012
I like your story, please update soon.
SLITH chapter 12 . 7/18/2012
HAHA! That is sooo Rebecca to jump in like that when no agreement has been made lol.

Nicely written for the tactical topic, going back and forth, using the map and coming up with an idea on where she could be going next. Nice to know that even with the 63's being in present day, they're still having issues with our new technology lol.

Can't wait for the next chapter!
SLITH
Lover of Reid chapter 12 . 7/18/2012
That was great. But just so you know, Hauser wasn't an Alcatraz guard, he was an officer with the San Fransisco Police Department. Seems a little wierd that Hauser would suddenly care what Ray would think about what he's got Rebecca doing. He's never cared before.
SLITH chapter 11 . 7/14/2012
Damn girl... please keep writing this fanfic! I would really like to see a confrontation between Rebecca and Vivan... oooh man.

This is really good, I love the interaction Vivan has been having with the Warden, the inmates, how she is when she is killing, etc. It is really fascinating, it feels like an actual episode with how you are writing it.

Keep up the good work!
SLITH
Lover of Reid chapter 11 . 7/13/2012
Just thought I would let you know that your chapters are messed up. Your chapter 11 is listed under chapter 8, and then the rest of the chapters are mixed up after that. I wasn't sure if you were aware or not.
xxxemoxbeccaxxx chapter 9 . 5/29/2012
I really love this twist please write more soon!
Lover of Reid chapter 9 . 5/21/2012
That was great. If Vivian ever figures out that Cobb was the one that told about her fear, she will be totally pissed. It would be interesting to have more 1960 Alcatraz centered chapters to learn more about her story.
Lover of Reid chapter 8 . 5/21/2012
That was interesting. I wonder what she did to Cobb to make him not want to talk about it?
Lover of Reid chapter 7 . 5/20/2012
This woman doesn't seem to have any problems with killing people whatsoever.
Lover of Reid chapter 6 . 5/15/2012
That was great. She must enjoy taunting them about what she's doing. I wonder who Hauser is going to get to help them out?
Lover of Reid chapter 5 . 5/15/2012
Great chapter once again. This woman seems like a real psycho.
LaineyK123 chapter 4 . 5/1/2012
I loved the end of this chapter! Nice job, I can't wait for more. I think that this is a very interesting character. I can't wait to see how it's all going to go. . .
Lover of Reid chapter 4 . 4/30/2012
Interesting. I'm guessing since you had young Hauser and his companion or whoever he is, that Miss Vivian was just taken to Alcatraz? Based on her physical description I'm not quite sure why the other inmates would be whistling, unless its been so long that they've seen a female other than Lucy that they would react to any female. I can't wait to see what happens next once you've updated.
Lover of Reid chapter 3 . 4/30/2012
That was good. But you had Hauser and Rebecca acting civil towards one another. Usually they get at each other's throats more than anything else. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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