Reviews for Vivian Antionette Blanch
Meyer Bosman chapter 12 . 12/14/2015
I felt because you created Vivian, you're neglecting Hauser, Rebecca and Doc. The flashbacks to Vivian being on Alcatraz is brilliantly written; there's character development for Vivian, I love how in the previous chapter how you explored her fear for water and being alone, it creates an atmosphere of not just being another '63, but an actual person! You should do more characters!
Meyer Bosman chapter 8 . 12/14/2015
Vivian is truly a magnificent character! Of all the chapters I've read so far, I enjoyed this one the most! You've managed to make Vivian real and not just a character!
xndr chapter 18 . 11/30/2015
cud be better if u fix gremmer
Nicky chapter 18 . 6/16/2015
Please keep updating! I love this story and I'm so curious to where it might be heading!
Guest chapter 18 . 2/28/2015
Love it! My second face character besides Ernest is Paxton Petty. Could you add him into later chapters?
Remmiec chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
i am a huge Alcatraz fan and miss the show so much i am loving the Vivian story line i have read the first 4 of your chapters awesome work.
RachelDawson chapter 16 . 2/10/2013
That is really awesome story :) Can't wait for another chapters.
Slytherin Studios chapter 12 . 9/24/2012
I like your story, please update soon.
SLITH chapter 12 . 7/18/2012
HAHA! That is sooo Rebecca to jump in like that when no agreement has been made lol.

Nicely written for the tactical topic, going back and forth, using the map and coming up with an idea on where she could be going next. Nice to know that even with the 63's being in present day, they're still having issues with our new technology lol.

Can't wait for the next chapter!
Lover of Reid chapter 12 . 7/18/2012
That was great. But just so you know, Hauser wasn't an Alcatraz guard, he was an officer with the San Fransisco Police Department. Seems a little wierd that Hauser would suddenly care what Ray would think about what he's got Rebecca doing. He's never cared before.
SLITH chapter 11 . 7/14/2012
Damn girl... please keep writing this fanfic! I would really like to see a confrontation between Rebecca and Vivan... oooh man.

This is really good, I love the interaction Vivan has been having with the Warden, the inmates, how she is when she is killing, etc. It is really fascinating, it feels like an actual episode with how you are writing it.

Keep up the good work!
Lover of Reid chapter 11 . 7/13/2012
Just thought I would let you know that your chapters are messed up. Your chapter 11 is listed under chapter 8, and then the rest of the chapters are mixed up after that. I wasn't sure if you were aware or not.
xxxemoxbeccaxxx chapter 9 . 5/29/2012
I really love this twist please write more soon!
Lover of Reid chapter 9 . 5/21/2012
That was great. If Vivian ever figures out that Cobb was the one that told about her fear, she will be totally pissed. It would be interesting to have more 1960 Alcatraz centered chapters to learn more about her story.
Lover of Reid chapter 8 . 5/21/2012
That was interesting. I wonder what she did to Cobb to make him not want to talk about it?
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