Reviews for The ancient warrior
Monster King chapter 14 . 7/3
Short but good is all I have to say good job
Guest chapter 3 . 6/5
Making this as cliche as it is ruins the entire thing. Just letting you know before I go. Nothing else. And one more thing. The story is going a bit too fast for anyone to like as well. Cya.
ThePhenoix11 chapter 8 . 3/18
Ok everything moves super fast with this one chapter she's the student then girlfriend then lover then pregnant with no devolpment besides repeating cannon Naruto on a chapter this needs a rewrite with more time to devolope your charaters relationship.
yindragonkiba chapter 12 . 6/23/2015
Guest chapter 6 . 9/13/2014
My predictions for next chapter; lemons, lemons, and guess what; MORE F$ %ING LEMONS!
(I don't have a problem with lemons/porn, I'm just trying to be funny)
Guest chapter 5 . 9/13/2014
Would be quite interesting to see Naruto fight against apocalypse, or even to see Naruto fighting all out, period...
(Haha lol)

Banjo the Fox chapter 2 . 7/9/2014
Ugh... Structure is so bad... But plot is so good...
Banjo the Fox chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
An amazing plot with good grammar, but very bad structure.
Hachichiyyin chapter 3 . 6/23/2014
This is terrible.
AnAddictedReader chapter 3 . 6/19/2014
I tried to stick it out for another chapter but I can't take it. I like the pairing but that wasn't enough.

Good luck on future stories.
AnAddictedReader chapter 1 . 6/19/2014
I'm facepalming throughout chapter one. Not only that, but you got to fix your story title. Please capitalize the first letters of 'ancient' and 'warrior'.
obscurereader chapter 9 . 6/10/2014
...why does Apocalypse know about the swords?
obscurereader chapter 7 . 6/10/2014
Chakra has to be unlocked and honed from a young age. These kids in high school wouldn't be able to access it, much less use it.
obscurereader chapter 4 . 6/10/2014
That is absolutely not how Scott's ability works and you know it. Not only does Scott lack chakra, the optic blasts come from another dimension, there is nothing Chakra/life-energy based about his ability.
obscurereader chapter 3 . 6/10/2014
..You really need to update your knowledge of Marvel superpowers. Scott's beams are concussive, not thermal. Throwing water on them would just get the water blown apart. Also, where the hell did Naruto pull a genjutsu from? and healing?

Next, try and keep in mind that NO ONE in the Marvel universe has a chakra network, and thus he could neither use genjutsu, not teach Jean how to heal.
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