Reviews for The ancient warrior
Guest chapter 1 . 5/17
Shitty. Learn to make an atmosphere enjoyable. Not all dandy jumpy, and random. It gets bland real fast.
Monster King chapter 14 . 7/3/2016
Short but good is all I have to say good job
Guest chapter 3 . 6/5/2016
Making this as cliche as it is ruins the entire thing. Just letting you know before I go. Nothing else. And one more thing. The story is going a bit too fast for anyone to like as well. Cya.
ThePhenoix11 chapter 8 . 3/18/2016
Ok everything moves super fast with this one chapter she's the student then girlfriend then lover then pregnant with no devolpment besides repeating cannon Naruto on a chapter this needs a rewrite with more time to devolope your charaters relationship.
yindragonkiba chapter 12 . 6/23/2015
Awwww
Guest chapter 6 . 9/13/2014
My predictions for next chapter; lemons, lemons, and guess what; MORE F$ %ING LEMONS!
-INTHEDARKESTNIGHT
(I don't have a problem with lemons/porn, I'm just trying to be funny)
Guest chapter 5 . 9/13/2014
Would be quite interesting to see Naruto fight against apocalypse, or even to see Naruto fighting all out, period...
(Haha lol)

-INTHEDARKESTNIGHT
Banjo the Fox chapter 2 . 7/9/2014
Ugh... Structure is so bad... But plot is so good...
Banjo the Fox chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
An amazing plot with good grammar, but very bad structure.
Hachichiyyin chapter 3 . 6/23/2014
This is terrible.
AnAddictedReader chapter 3 . 6/19/2014
I tried to stick it out for another chapter but I can't take it. I like the pairing but that wasn't enough.

Good luck on future stories.
AnAddictedReader chapter 1 . 6/19/2014
I'm facepalming throughout chapter one. Not only that, but you got to fix your story title. Please capitalize the first letters of 'ancient' and 'warrior'.
obscurereader chapter 9 . 6/10/2014
...why does Apocalypse know about the swords?
obscurereader chapter 7 . 6/10/2014
Chakra has to be unlocked and honed from a young age. These kids in high school wouldn't be able to access it, much less use it.
obscurereader chapter 4 . 6/10/2014
That is absolutely not how Scott's ability works and you know it. Not only does Scott lack chakra, the optic blasts come from another dimension, there is nothing Chakra/life-energy based about his ability.
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