His name is Charlie Evans. :p Nicely written! :D

Great premise, something I'm a little surprised no one before thought of... and I'm happy you did.

Excellant! We are on the same wavelength. I just published a new first chapter of a story I call "My Favorite Thasian". By the way, Charlie's last name is Evans.

yay! charlie X! one of my all-time fave TOS episodes!

i havent seen the TNG episode with amanda, but i liked this! nice job!

Nice throwback.

Unexpected enough to actually make me smile (though I placed Amanda pretty quick).

That's all Charlie really needed anyway. A guiding figure he couldn't wipe out of existance when he got angry; someone stronger than him.

Enjoyable read.

Sweet, and unexpected. I thought you were talking about Trelane at the very beginning, but did pick up on the second character right off. This does seem slightly better suited for the TOS category, only because it might disguise the identity of the second character a little longer.

'Charlie X''s last name is 'Evans'.

Interesting premise and good writing.