|Reviews for Servant of Evil|
| skylar the wolf chapter 3 . 6/25/2013
Isn't servent of evil the name of a very popular vocaliod song sanged by Len kagmie? You know where len and rin gets seperanted and years later they find each other again.
| XxRaindr0pxX chapter 5 . 11/30/2012
This is so interesting, can you please continue? I want to find out Scar's Story! Lol, alliteration there XD
| XxRaindr0pxX chapter 4 . 11/30/2012
"You wouldn't be crying too if you just remembered killing your girlfriend! Oh, that's right, you don't have one!"
Best line ever, I cracked up at that!
And yay! Finally Reala escaped, and he's had enough torture too!
| XxRaindr0pxX chapter 3 . 11/30/2012
I can't help feeling sorry for him, even though he's supposed to be evil!
| XxRaindr0pxX chapter 2 . 11/30/2012
Oh this is so sad :((
I hope Reala escapes in the next chapter!
| XxRaindr0pxX chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
Wow, this is a really intense and suspenseful chapter to the story, I wonder what's happening to Reala next?
| Pre-Ragnarok chapter 5 . 8/17/2012
Upload... Or... DIE!
| Pre-Ragnarok chapter 4 . 8/17/2012
Good on you, Ree! That's showing him!
| Pre-Ragnarok chapter 2 . 8/17/2012
When Reala was being hypnotised, I thought the guy with the pocket watch was a rapist, I was like - "NOOOO, not Reala!"
| Pre-Ragnarok chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
Wouldn't it be funny if Wizeman turned up just as those guys said they were going to kill Reala?
| Silver's Aqua chapter 4 . 4/25/2012
...now what the hell am I gonna do with this knife Santa gave me?
LETS CELEBRATE WITH CAKE! :D
| Celestriakle chapter 3 . 4/24/2012
Money? In a dream world?
Coercing Reala is a good idea, but the execution's rather shaky: What you have posted here is still very raw. I understand you wrote this on your ipod, which is exactly why you'd be better served to port it over to a computer and fill it out there: Add descriptions, paragraph breaks, and flesh out the various events. Perhaps you should include a prologue to introduce Annabella and her dynamic with Reala. I'd recommend also giving Scar a scene to introduce himself, so you can remove that pesky AN from the middle of the scene; it's distracting and detracting from the story. Since they're fan characters, you should also give each a description.
I hope this advice helps you to make your story the best it can be! :)
| Silver's Aqua chapter 3 . 4/24/2012
Me: Santa, I wanna knife for Christmas! :D
Santa: You are being naughty!
Me: But Ree's bring forced to do bad things!
Santa: Here's your knife, lets roll. :)