|Reviews for Loyalty|
| Starz chapter 16 . 7/28/2013
This fic is absolutely fantastic. The tale u spun is so captivating and extraordinary. Ur creativity is amazing. I am totally ur fan.
| foggraven chapter 6 . 7/3/2012
cornered by an experienced hunter XD
| foggraven chapter 4 . 7/3/2012
wasn't' expecting that
| foggraven chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
this is pretty interesting
| splitheart1120 chapter 16 . 5/30/2012
It's funny how the past had such a huge affect on the present...
| splitheart1120 chapter 15 . 5/30/2012
I wonder what Ash will find...
| Tanya Adams 64 chapter 16 . 5/29/2012
Such a fascinating ending. Too bad the story has to end so soon. Great job as usual and look forward for more of stories in the near future.
Tanya Adams 64
| Hoenn Master96 chapter 16 . 5/29/2012
Intriguing. Thank you for the entertainment.
| DeathGoblin chapter 16 . 5/29/2012
That was a satisfying ending, though I don;t think that last part needed to be labeled the epilogue, though it was separated by time from the rest of the chapters events. I like that fact that things start out mystical, but then the spirits all turn out to be pokemon, that was a nice twist. Also, since the ocean spirit was lugia, this thing did have something to do with legendary pokemon after all, I also like the idea of the vengeful spirits being absorbed by spiritomb and slowly passing on over time. The last comment from Ash (about Brock's sculptures of Lily) was a nice lighthearted way to end the story.
| Ankhesenamen chapter 16 . 5/29/2012
Great conclision! It does leave me wanting more (as its left open) but I suppose thats the nature of the story hey ;)!
| Ankhesenamen chapter 14 . 5/29/2012
I'll go man watching!
Hahah Pixel is awesome! :D!
| Ankhesenamen chapter 13 . 5/29/2012
Ohhh creepy! I think if I was living in the Poke-verse ghost types would be the type that freaked me out most.
| Rocketlord6485 chapter 16 . 5/28/2012
Awesome final chapter! I'm so glad many of these questions were in answered in such depth, what with the exorcisms and flashbacks! Very exciting! Although, I might have missed something regarding the Lugia mention . . . :/
Hmmm I'm wondering where Ash and Misty's relationship will be headed now that they've pretty much settled their differences. Perhaps a continuation? :)
Again, great little story! Well done! :D
| PhinalPhantasy chapter 16 . 5/28/2012
Very interesting conclusion. Does leave Ash and Misty's relationship open though. I liked this story overall. Great job
| WhiteEagle1985 chapter 16 . 5/28/2012
Excellent way to finish! Thanks for writing such a great story!