|Reviews for Unfinished Business|
| ziggy.uk chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Amazing tag Sonya, just got round to reading it since the fun of JIB3 :) You got the boys spot on there, their characters, their emotions, everything, and Bobby too. Could so imagine this happening once the boys got to their motel room. Your words got right to the heart of everything and it was an emotional read. And yes, Bobby stayed for his boys, to make sure they are all right, and they are his unfinished business.
Just awesome, loved it :)
| spnloverlouise chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
You always amaze me with how your SPN stories flow & you speak through the characters as if you WERE them! I think you missed your calling & if only SPN KNEW how awesome you were that you'd have a new job in Vancouver as one of their professional writers!
Well done! ;D
| ryder21 chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
I understand Dean's reaction, he was just beginning to accept Bobby's death and move on when suddenly he is back, and Dean knows that he will have to lose him all over again. I could visualise this happening as I was reading it, you have captured the essence of the boys, in particular Dean, and Bobby so well.
I am enjoying Season 7.
| TheBigChillQueen chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
I was a bit surprised by Dean's reaction to seeing Bobby. I figured he'd try to hug him or something...but I suppose I can see why he acted the way he did as well.
I loved this point of view X3 It was great getting an insight to what Bobby may have been thinking at the time! I loved it! :D Excellent work X3
| pandora jazz chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
I enjoyed reading your tag for this episode.
I think you did a great job capturing Dean's thoughts after seeing Bobby again and as he tried to explain his feelings to Sam.
"I mean, we already lost him once. I don't know if I can go through that again. Can you?"
I don't want to go through losing Bobby again right now, so I hope Sam's right and the brothers can find a way to make this work for a while longer at least.
Thanks for sharing your story with us.
I enjoyed reading it.
| Friendly Persuasion chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
I loved this! I felt so bad for Bobby when Dean didn't even have a moment of happiness to see him. However, I understand Dean's reluctance after everything he's experienced. It probably won't end well. You captured the feelings of Bobby and Dean beautifully!
| Marianna Morgan chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
"They're my unfinished business."
So very true. GUH.
| jensensgirl3 chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
Bobby will always be there for his boys no matter what, they are his unfinished business and he'll do what he can to help them.
I know why Bobby did what he did by staying behind, I just hope that he doesn't come like those vengeful spirits he and the boys hunted.
I don't think Dean will ever burn or get rid of the flask, that is the only thing that is keeping Bobby with his boys. But if something happen that he has to it would tear him and Sam apart, it's the only thing they have left that meant something to them.
| The Lilac Elf of Lothlorien chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
Love the story. And yeah-Bobby's not going to go anywhere until he knows his boys will be okay.
| Twinchester Angel chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
Yay! You wrote another story! I love when you write. I'm pretty sure I've told you that before. Lol This was achingly accurate to what I think happened after the episode. Bobby pouting and sulking but the whole time knowing Dean was right. I loved how hopeful Sam seemed in the episode and I love that you continued with it. I knew Dean learned something from his stint as Death. But then again, Dean knew what's dead should stay dead throughout the whole series. Except for when it came to Sammy. He knows his mom shouldn't come back, he didn't want to save Adam when Sam asked after the ghouls killed him, he's just always known that. But when it came to Sam, he just couldn't abide by that rule. He was tempted with his Dad but he knew better. I'm sure he's been tempted with Bobby but, again, he knows better. And what Dean said to Bobby was exactly what Bobby would've said to him. I think you have Bobby's motivation pinned down exactly right too. Of course he wants to help with the Leviathan and of course he wants to make sure the boys are safe but in the end, he chose to stick around because he wasn't ready. Because he didn't want to leave the boys. This was perfect, as usual. Thanks for a very insightful look into what's going on right now. Oh! I loved it when Sam was having a bad dream and Bobby was thinking about how Dean does too and how he's not the only thing haunting the boys. Although that made my heart break a little for them. And Dean's lines about his feelings and Sam's feelings? Yay! It's taken 3 decades but the Winchester boys finally have a thought that isn't self-sacrificing! Haha Seriously, I thought that whole conversation was perfect. It actually reminded me of when they were kids and Sam was all hopeful and innocent while Dean was trying to explain to Sam how it really was. This was awesome, well written and again completely in character. I loved it. Lastly, Casper the friendly ghosthunter was sooooo Bobby and it made me giggle. :D Thanks for this! Can't wait to read more from you. *hugs*
| LittleLurker chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
Very heart-wrenching and beautifully told... even though I haven't even seen any of S7 so far (so I can't say if it fits well with whatever episode), but I can and will say that you have the boys and Bobby's character down to a 'T'.
Thanks for sharing and take care! D.
| tvj12 chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
Great story. I like how you conveyed the same emotion that Jim Beaver put into his performance, and Bobby's need to stay for the boys. You put just the right amount of hope for Dean to match the tone of the episode. -tvj12
| 7kstar chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
Really nice job of catching the conflict. Dean needing Bobby but knowing in the end, it will hurt more than it helps.
I wish they hadn't done this, but will just have to watch like a train wreck. The show I loved always had ups and downs, good and bad eps, but lately it makes me miss the old more than loving the new season. But I'll keep watching and stories like this help. Thanks. :)