Reviews for Desperation
IrritatedScotsman chapter 5 . 1/9
Damn, I really wish you would continue this ;-;
Jazz03 chapter 5 . 11/4/2012
Please don't stop! I really want to know what happens next.
MorningStar Disraeli chapter 5 . 10/6/2012
There really aren't that many long Nellis fics that I actually find enjoyable but this one is pretty good. Please continue, I really want to know what happens next.

Jeremy turns pink chapter 5 . 9/5/2012
Still amazing! You should really continue this - your writing is really good. I'm a huge fan of you already.
Jeremy chapter 4 . 9/5/2012
I really like this story. Some of it is very cleverly written. Keep up the good work, you're amazing!
SoulMore chapter 5 . 8/30/2012
OodleNoodle chapter 5 . 6/20/2012
Oh, how I love cliff hangers. I'm being quite honest in that regard. They leave me excited, anticipating the follow up.

As usual, nice work!
OodleNoodle chapter 4 . 6/20/2012
I must say, I'm looking forward to future chapters. This story is delightful so far!

Excellent work!
OodleNoodle chapter 3 . 6/20/2012
It appears that I'll be leaving a comment for each chapter. Again I must praise your work; it really is well written.
OodleNoodle chapter 2 . 6/20/2012
Curses! Another well written chapter. It would seem that I'm going to be up for awhile reading the next chapter, possibly the fourth as well.

I enjoy that you're alternating perspectives!
OodleNoodle chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
Ah, I figured I'd read the first chapter, save the rest for tomorrow and go to bed, but alas... I feel compelled to read another chapter.

This was well written and has certainly captured my attention!
whitebengal14 chapter 5 . 6/4/2012
Finally, there's progress! :D

Anxious to see what they'll talk about in the next chapterrrr. Oh wait, is Ellis going to give his side of the story? So... the next two chapters? D:

Anyway. Hoping that you decide to continue and update soon and also, wondering what's going to happen in the next chapters
whitebengal14 chapter 4 . 6/4/2012
What IS going to happen tonight? Suspense!
whitebengal14 chapter 3 . 6/4/2012
That poor guy.

URHG. I don't like not having anything in mind to add to a review. D: BOooo on it.

Umm... let's see Ellis' side of the story! :'D
whitebengal14 chapter 2 . 6/4/2012
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww! D: *doesn't know what else to say*

Dude, I wish the chapters were a bit longer and that more happened in them. But I guess it's not all that bad. Just thought I'd complain about something dumb for a bit... ;D

Now that we've seen both Nick and Ellis' side of what happened, let's see the awkwardness in the next day!
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