Reviews for False Starts Naruto
Difdi chapter 9 . 5/5
Fallout is completely screwed up...having the Tailed Beasts connected to it mentally actually explains a few things about how screwed up the Beasts are.
Difdi chapter 3 . 5/5
You have a typo. The phrases "couldn't care less" and "could care less" have opposite meanings. Many people (yourself included) use "could" when they actually mean "couldn't." If you could care less, that means that you DO care, not that you don't care.
Difdi chapter 2 . 5/5
While I have no doubt Genma contains gluten given his typical diet, the word you want is gluttonous, not glutenous.
Difdi chapter 1 . 5/5
It figures that Kushina Uzumaki would have schematics for making an Ork Shoota.

Oh, and dakka isn't Ork for ammunition per se, it's Ork for ordnance on its way down range. Laser beams, plasma blasts, artillery shells, missiles, railgun darts, they're all dakka. But they're not dakka until they're fired, and cease to be dakka once they've hit and the rounds (or their residue) are lying on the ground or embedded in a wound.
Guest chapter 8 . 8/26/2017
I am Iron Man! DATTEBAYO! This is a beauty
Guest chapter 5 . 8/26/2017
I approve
Guest chapter 4 . 4/1/2017
It's possible canon Shikamaru is actually Kal-El but thinks it's too troublesome to actually use any of his superpowers, because if he used them once other people would hound him to do it all the time, and that would be troublesome.
cr33p3rik chapter 8 . 10/8/2016
yeess this must be done
The Richmaster chapter 8 . 9/17/2016
this is basically Tony Stark in Konaha... it works a lot better than it sounds
The Richmaster chapter 4 . 9/17/2016
A lazy Kryptonian actually sounds pretty fun to read about
The Richmaster chapter 3 . 9/17/2016
the powers were shown pretty well
The Richmaster chapter 2 . 9/17/2016
Genma's a pretty interesting choice here and he could stay up to his old tricks since Naruto would be the one responsible for his actions
The Richmaster chapter 1 . 9/17/2016
This was pretty fun; I like the idea of 'since this didn't work properly, I'll make a bigger one which is bound to work better' and it actually worked pretty well
Cemalidor chapter 7 . 8/29/2016
You are raising some pretty interesting points in the AN's as well as in the story. A darker setting than the standard happy/go/lucky pow you see mostly, but nevertheless more fitting if you take the ninja occupation under consideration.
chris94 chapter 3 . 7/21/2016
why the fuck wood u make him wear magnetos cloths and helmet wtf
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