Reviews for Exobytten
evolution-500 chapter 3 . 8/23/2013
Pretty good so far. There are a couple of punctuation errors, though.
Days Past Forgotten chapter 2 . 1/13/2013
More!
omniamalgam chapter 2 . 12/6/2012
I like the story. Plain and simply said. The point of view changes and it seems to have the potential to be either a great fic or a bust... We won't know however if it's only TWO CHAPTERS!
Get cracking for a real review meng...
EpicQuest chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Interesting. Looking Forward To Additional Chapters In The FUTURE!
twinbladesofthedead chapter 2 . 9/20/2012
Amazing how sewing can be a power I like it so make more
JrBenson chapter 2 . 7/24/2012
Interesting concept. I play DCUO religiously so I am a bit psyc'ed to read the rest.
Left4Hunger chapter 2 . 7/20/2012
Okay, you REALLY need to keep up with this story! There are like NO DCUO fics and yours actually has great OCs and you're very adept at knowing how to write and I am DYING for another chapter. I mean, you've already hooked me with the mysterious voice at the beginning of the last chapter.
I'm still dying to learn more about Richie's background and powers though, which is good to keep the reader wanting more :)
Story is looking promising! Keep up the great work.
-Cody
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
This is really good so far. Keep it up!