Reviews for Graze
stay.traught.i'm.deactivated chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Heh, I'm a giddy fangirl, too, so don't feel alone. XD Love the fic; it has a rather quiet aura, nice and sweet and peaceful. :)
mizone chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
WHOA THAT WAS BRILLIANT. Please keep writing more Makorra! Everyone was in character and omg, your fanfic was amazing. More Makorra!
tfobmv18 chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
I absolutely love it. Keep up the good work.
rikki shiratori chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
i literally squealed when i saw an alert about this! haha. i am both a makorra fangirl and a big fan of your work. i certainly hope for more inspiration from them to come to you :)
Ju5t An0th3r H3d63h06 chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
Stupid fanfiction mobile login spazzing.

I'm right with you on the whole 'squee-and-laugh-like-a-giddy-fangirl' thing! Wish I could do something like this, but I'm not comfortable enough with writing their styles seem to be good at it already, though. *anime pout* I'm so jealous. No grammar errors to speak of, but I was reading fast so I couldn't really tell. But if there are, nothing story-impeding. Nice meshing of the shippy scenes! Went back to read it, cuz I didn't catch it at first. Or maybe I'm just suffering from lack of sleep. :/

Heh, I may have accidentally introduced my sister to Legend of Korra and got her scarily obsessed with Mako. Whoopsies.
Dsman chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
dude i just saw that epasode and i had to watch it 3 times to see every part of it
Julia451 chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
Now THIS is a good fic! I love your phraseology and your interpretation of Mako's thought-processes. Every paragraph is better than the last. It's just... so refreshing to read something so creative, smart, and well-written. Thanks for the great job!
closed1412 chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
That was adorable. Thank you for writing that :)
GirlCat817 chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
Join the chorus of fangirls after that episode. I like the point about it being under and overstated. Excellent use of third person limited. Loved it, my first favorite for this fandom.