Reviews for Us
I'm NO Angel haha chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Wow, This was very simple and cute.

Very beautiful.

Keep writing more poems.

Cheers to you and SasuNaru.

Angel-chan
ShikonnoTamahater chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
YOU HAVE BEEN BURNED! No, lol, jk.

Short, sweet, to the point. Nothing better than that. Imagery, the message the poem was meant to send: It was all there. Thank you for a short but happy(/slightest twinge of a bittersweet feel) read.

I look forward to your next work. Hopefully it will be Naruto so I will feel comfortable reading it! Please be quick! lol

{ShikonnoTamahater} P.S. I think you've found a niche in poetry writing. Very good!
ArlecchiNin chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
O' dearest!

That was amazing just.

How plain and simple reality can turn to be. Twas beautiful!

And here's my ply to encourage you to write more.

Cheers!

-ArlecchiNin

ps. I very much enjoyed the cookies and the hug. Have some for you as well
Carmielle chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
Okay, so I visited your profile after you reviewed my fic and I have to say I really like your writing style! This was sweet and sad and everything that I like in a one shot, so well done!
PrincessAgainstThePatriarchy chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
omg I LUV this! Its so... *sniffles* cute, and sweet. I luv this couple! KEEP WRITING! :D
Carol Cosplay chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
That was a little cute and sad story. Keep up the good work. -Sasunaruluv14