Reviews for Refrain
Dechirures chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
This is really Good
HawkRider chapter 10 . 10/8/2012
Well, that was interesting.

Gah! Sorry it took me so long to read this.

HawkRider chapter 9 . 9/15/2012
Poor Kairi... She was a bit of an idiot, but nobody can help being dense...

Sorry it took so long.

HawkRider chapter 8 . 8/10/2012
Oh, poor Kai...

Great job!

HawkRider chapter 7 . 6/1/2012
Oh, I loved that flashback. This was such a great use of the theme! Great job with this chapter!

HawkRider chapter 6 . 5/17/2012
Quite a paradox to Kairi's dream... But still really good. You're doing really well.

HawkRider chapter 5 . 5/17/2012
This chapter was interesting. Nice job!

HawkRider chapter 4 . 5/17/2012
Poor Kai. I feel so sorry for her...

broccoliwaffle chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
HawkRider chapter 3 . 5/14/2012
I feel so sorry for Kai. I am definitely going to go ahead with that idea now...

HawkRider chapter 2 . 5/8/2012
Nice chapter. Really interesting. 9/10
HawkRider chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
Sorry I've taken so long... Really. I feel horrible...

MonMonCandie chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
Awww, Riku. D: Man, I'm guessing this story's going to be full of angst too huh? Having an unrequited love sucks! :'D Well, at least Riku's going to try and move on... Wonder how that'll go? I thought it was sort of bittersweet how Riku got one last group hug before going off to college in another city. Great job!

The only thing I noticed was that some of your sentences in your earlier paragraphs were awkwardly worded; as in there was a word that probably shouldn't be there. Nothing big; just something I noticed. :) Also - and this is just a pet peeve of mine - I think it should be "Radiant Garden" instead of "Radiant Gardens". That just bugs me because it was never referred to as Radiant Gardens in the games... OTL But hey, whatever floats your boat. LOL

In any case. Great job! Good luck with the challenge! :)