Reviews for Extinguished
Guest chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
That was a beautiful, practical, and tragic story. You really captured Lord Shen's personality and feelings towards his parents. I literally started crying when he started screaming he loved them. Best fan-fic of Lord Shen.
Netbug-Archive chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
Why on Earth has nobody reviewed this yet? This is REALLY good. I love the details and the emotions you put in it. Great job!

I see this mistake with a lot of fic writers though: Two characters shouldn't have dialog in the same paragraph. Not only is it a grammar rule, but it keeps readers from getting confused about who is talking when a lot of dialog is involved.