|Reviews for My Queen|
| tinawinna chapter 6 . 1/10
Please update soon.
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/25/2014
| Deadpool-girl chapter 6 . 10/19/2014
Please update soon, the story is really good.
| charlielou1998 chapter 6 . 8/20/2014
aww such a sweet ending!
| belladu57 chapter 6 . 1/23/2014
| vampgirliegirl chapter 6 . 5/22/2013
yay! keep going!
| DeathNoteMaker chapter 6 . 3/12/2013
Wow, despite that it being obvious from the whole summary and all...I don't think Ramses should have Kagome. What is this whole thing with the Shikon? Why is it so adamant that Kagome is with Ramses? I'm just confused. To me it just seems like the Jewel is forcing Kagome to be with him just for the shits and giggles. There seems to be no reason whatsoever that requires her to become Ramses's. What the Jewel just pulled with the sealing of her powers can be considered a "bitch move". Not to mention that it made absolutely no sense as to why it is trying to forcibly make her comply instead of acting in the way the Shikon usually would (i.e. PERSUADING, COAXING, etc) It just seems like this will probably be a story of Kagome being trapped in a loveless relationship and SOMEHOW fall in love with Ramses despite how badly he treats her (Yep can see it already). I don't think the Stockholm Syndrome will be in effect for Kagome due to how strong-minded she is, this will just be for the convenience of the pairing.
So overall, I think while the idea of this fic is awesome, if this is going to turn into one of those "Kagome is going to suffer continuously throughout the story, forced into a situation/relationship she doesn't want to be in just because despite there being another character who actually would develop true feelings of love for her (the latter not the vibe I'm getting from Ramses, who I think will remain a brat until the very end and even if he did change, it wouldn't make up for everything that he has done)" then I'll stop reading right about now.
But of course I'll probably not stop due to liking the idea of Kagome and Kail.
But then I think of the fact that Kagome will undoubtedly end up with Ramses and the thought has officially just killed my interest in this story. Wow, that was fast.
Anyway, good luck with your story.
| A chapter 6 . 2/17/2013
update! it's been 3 months
| dark-driex-07 chapter 6 . 1/26/2013
waaaaah... didn't see that coming...
| YinKeket chapter 6 . 11/19/2012
WHAT Kagome what have you done. now you brought Prince Kail into this mess. yep her power showed up in a good time. wow Ramses was Kagome past, present and future, awesome. man that Shikon loved to butt in at times. so the Egyptian has a Shikon jewel too. nice. i wonder if the powers will come back once Kagome agree to her fate. Kail left a mark on her left ear lobe. oh i want Yuri to talk to Kagome in their own language that would be fun to see happen. man Ramses needed to learn, but Prince Kail can take Kagome to his mother seeing how much in common they have. more of this please. keep up the good work and do your best. take care and be safe. i bet the wine there was very strong. that's cool how her scent smelt like honey and roses.
| YinKeket chapter 5 . 11/19/2012
oh man that's right she can't see her family. that's tough. uh Shikon no Tama was talking not weird at all lol. Selene was getting better and of Anubis and it was a Sacred Jewel. another one lol i think Kagome was having luck getting those. now he knew the prophecy was Kagome right down to her eyes. sigh Ramses you suck at treating a woman right. sigh. in time he will learn.
| YinKeket chapter 4 . 11/19/2012
well when King Ramses met Kagome then he would change his mind for his son to marry Yuri's child. because Kagome is a little like Yuri about please don't bow we are the same type of person. oh man what balls Ramses 2 has telling what he felt. dance around with joy on what the prophecy said and was Ramses 2 blind at what he saw in Kagome. sigh. Selene super awesome.
| YinKeket chapter 3 . 11/19/2012
i bet Yuri Ishtar would be happy to have another Japanese person there to talk their own language messing with the men around them. yep he saw her chest which was wet. wow he's a little player with the kissing toll. lol Kail got in trouble by his sister Eimi nice. lol win how he was messing with her, but she does need to get out of the wet clothes or she will be sick. who would blame her for that of a weak heart lol.
| YinKeket chapter 2 . 11/19/2012
yay the evil Naraku is dead and no other than Kagome who kills him in the end. oh man being suck into the jewel. that sucks big time. wow on her new quest like fate telling her that she was meant for someone else and she is very powerful. as for her she is pissed off and wouldn't blame her. lol. lol wow been save from the water then a sword in her face what a day. well his wish will come true. lol Ramses II if i saw a sword he is a dead man, but he is cute. wait Kagome falls on to Ramses II and kisses him, uh. what a way to meet someone lol. i love the clothes Princess Eimi Mursili is wearing. wow uh Ramses II should be a little bit nicer. yeah his father was in love with Eimi Mursili's mother. not right to force a child to fall in love with someone they don't love. lo such a huge win where Kagome blew up in Ramses II's face and took over. oh my Kail has a liking to Kagome. crap a battle over her, but hey it happens.
| YinKeket chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
i like the to world come together and i can see that. well done.