Reviews for Ninja Blockade
her name was Irrelevant chapter 2 . 4/27/2012
Nice job! I'm really enjoying this so far :]

My only bit of criticism is kind of technically really, which is the time lapse in the middle without any kind of indication (between Peter giving Kairi permission to go to the fight, and her returning with Finn). Maybe a line break or something?

Anyways, nicely done
Alice O'delle chapter 2 . 4/27/2012
Great story line! I would love to see a filler chapter of the fight with Finn later on. Be careful about repeating phrases. You use "his friend" alot where "him" or other descriptions can be used. Overall good with just a few grammatical errors but those happen to everyone when they're got a plot bunny scrambling to be put in a word document :)
her name was Irrelevant chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
I love it so far! It's really different than most of the other Real Steel fics. Please keep writing this! :)