Reviews for Unknown Element
PercyJacksonWillKickYourButt chapter 5 . 9/7/2013
Did you post the same chapter twice?
PnutButtr chapter 19 . 12/20/2012
Lol. Their love story is so cute! XD The scene wasn't too, for lack of a better term, erotic and I think that's what is nice about this fic. It's about their love story not just some random porno. Lol! XD
Silver-09 chapter 19 . 12/13/2012
Glad I could make you laugh :)
Meelo is somewhere looking through doors shouting "Do you have any idea what time it is?!"

Control F "...they just exchanged a few more kissed" Should that be kissed or kisses?
Fire Werewolf chapter 19 . 12/12/2012
Makorra moment :D
Fire Werewolf chapter 18 . 12/11/2012
WOO! YOU FINALLY UPDATED! FIRE WEREWOLF NEEDS HER MAKORRA FEELS!
MakorraLove97 chapter 18 . 12/11/2012
Aww I like the moment with Bolin and Mako and haha the ending was amazing loved it a lot! :) Please update this soon! great chapter as love the story! :D
Silver-09 chapter 18 . 12/11/2012
Such a heartwarming and precious moment.

Mako: "Extra! Extra! Read all about it! Girl dates ex-boyfriend's brother!"
Asami: "Extra! Extra! Read all about it! 'Man' kisses girl brother is dating when he has a girlfriend!"
Mako: "Touche."
Korra and Asami high-five.
Fire Wolf chapter 16 . 10/25/2012
Hey Tea great chapters by the way! O and when are Mako and Korra gonna have their FUN? Cause I mean ya killing me here! I need lemony chapter for some apparent reason!
PnutButtr chapter 17 . 10/17/2012
Yeah it did sound a little kinky, huh? XD lol. Hope to read your new chapter soon!
PnutButtr chapter 16 . 10/17/2012
Happy Belated Birthday from me! XP Sorry for the late review. I don't mind waiting for chapters. ;)
Guest chapter 7 . 10/11/2012
This was a good read, but it got harder to stomach once I saw the lack of depth for Asami and Bolin. Yeah I know it's a Makorra fic, but it just bothered me a bit.
Mel228g chapter 16 . 10/10/2012
love this story, update soooon! :D
MakorraLover72 chapter 17 . 10/8/2012
I am a HARDCORE Makorra shipper and I ship Bosami. O and since Mako is a cop don't forget to add handcuffs for there little fun time. "wink" "wink" ;)
kitty chapter 17 . 10/5/2012
really good post more soon
Silver-09 chapter 17 . 9/29/2012
Dear Agni, is she talking about Avatar Aang's memorial?!
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