|Reviews for Bully|
| Craftygirl11 chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
I liked this one too. It was funny. Steve does bully Danny a lot but they do act like brothers most of the time. Danny can take care of himself and if he can't then at least he has his Ohana.
| Spence Sabien chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
Perfect. Just...perfect. :)
| Kit Merlot chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
I like that you had Kono looking out for Danny and pointing out to him that some of his actions might seem unkind. And truthfully, Danny's in good shape too that I have no doubt that he could put Steve to shame in a fair race.
And Danny's right that they rag on each other like brothers, but Steve needs to be careful not to take it too far.
| Brumeier chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Great way to shine the light on Danny and Steve's real relationship. Although I do prefer slashing these two, the way you write them as brothers is really wonderful. They know they can count on each other, and that's the most important thing. LOL at Kono being a tattle tale. ::grins::
| cytpotter chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
:D Need I say more? Great story I was thinking along those lines a bit myself with some of Steve's actions but I love how he got back at the SuperSEAL! Letting the mutt sleep in his bed! :D Thanks for sharing!
| vampyfreak chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
| 7kstar chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
oh the fun of payback. It can be so sweet a treat. Thanks for the laugh. Enjoyed it. :)
| crokettsgirl chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
I really loved this story. That's what brother's do, that was great how you had Danny explain the to Kono and she compared her self to a sister. The Ohana...great job , Sue
| Synbou chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
That was a great Ohana moment. I like to see them looking out for each other, not just as team, but as a family too. And true,siblings have their own set of rules and ways to do things. Thansk for another touching story.
| moonjat54 chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
As a McGarrett girl I was a bit worried when I began this story but I have to admit that you turned it beautifully into a brother story. A sister story too. Loved that Kono demanded the money from Steve. And Steve taking it to heart that he may have hurt Danny without meaning to, very touching. So thanks for this gem.
| Mei2 chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
I think it comes down to perspective. I can understand each character's point of view. Kono would look at the situation through the lens of her past and may infer something that Chin, Steve or Danny may not. Sure, Danny and Steve's relationship is one of brotherly affection and annoyance, but that doesn't mean one should cross the line, and Kono called as she saw it. You don't mess with another person's coco puff (especially if it was a treat from someone else). No, that's just, no. There's being a brotherly jerk, and then there's being a big poopyhead.
A thought-provoking story.
| fairgirl chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
Very cute story. I love how Kono stands up for Danny...and I just realized everything she said was true, Steve is kind of "bullying" Danny in some way.
| FicreaderT chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
At first I didn't really agree with Steve being mean to Danny, but I like how Danny explained it, and I'm glad Danny clarified it for Kono. Well written, as always! You do such a great job with your stories!
| Cokie316 chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
very, very good. and I owe you a note which I will try to finish today. It has just been hectic! But this one is a good one. And yes, apparently you have received a commentary from Sym about Danny, too. :)
| Rogue Tomato chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
This is a great illustration of how this team has become a family. Kono playing the mother figure over the three boys of the group. I really enjoyed the little things, such as Chin calling Danny during the confrontation between Steve and Kono. Really cute.
I do have to agree with Chin... Danny doesn't need Kono's protection. He's too tough, and probably a little proud, to want anyone sticking up for him. :)