|Reviews for Scarecrow Dementia|
| Dragonlver22 chapter 3 . 10/13
Huh, well this was interesting. I'm gonna be honest, I thought that the transformation into insanity would have been a little slower than that, but this works too.
The story was indeed original and I found no noticeable spelling mistakes. I can't really give too much of a review since you stopped adding chapters to this story, and therefore there isn't much of a story to review. However, the three chapters that do exist showed great promise for a fun yet emotional narrative.
| Dragonlver22 chapter 1 . 10/13
"... there's always one consistent problem: It's always Jack, Jack, Jack."
*Snorts* It's the Jack-Jack Attack! (Tell me if you got that reference) It's so true, though. One of my stories is actually about Rafael, so I can understand wanting to give the other humans some love.
| CryptIXeeper chapter 3 . 4/19/2014
It's a shame you haven't updated this.
| SurprisedAnal chapter 3 . 12/8/2013
I really like what you're doing with Miko. Please, update soon!
| The Dusk Terror chapter 3 . 5/21/2013
Please update soon! I have been reading your stories, and your work interests me. So please update soon so I know what is gonna happen next!
| EvilPurpleCookiePenkeyMonguin chapter 3 . 5/5/2013
Please can you update this! I would really like to read more. :)
| Shadowlocke Prime chapter 3 . 4/9/2013
interesting... definitely interesting.
| Jade Surro chapter 3 . 3/5/2013
Cool story! WHEN ARE U GOING TO UPDATE?! What happens next!?
| Crow-DarkHeart chapter 3 . 12/10/2012
Not bad more interesting then most fics I find of her doing something.
| Mistress Megatron chapter 3 . 11/10/2012
Please update this soon, it's wonderful. I applaud your writing ability and style and this story is exceptionally well written. It's better than candy.
| Bumblebeecamaro38 chapter 3 . 7/30/2012
Ah, I wonder what MECH will do now that a crazed Miko is coming o find them. Will they try to kill her or use her? I can't wait to find out!
| Fangirlanonymousmember16001 chapter 3 . 6/20/2012
MORE! MORE! MORE! You've gotta update this soon. This is AWESOME. Love how you're doing a Mech experimentation fanfic on Miko. There's too much of this with Jack as the victim. You're writing style is superb, and the part where she's hallucinating about the eyes and the voices is a very nice touch. The technical talk about the nanites affecting her biology is also great- usually, the victim (Jack) is knocked out, and BOOM! The next chapter, he's an technorganic killing machine. What your doing here makes it sound so much more plausible- as plausible as being turned into a technorganic killing machine can be, anyway.
I just hope Silas decides not to kill her. It would be the coolest thing ever for Miko to go all cyber ninja, and end up facing the Autobots (and Jack and Rafael) in battle. But whatever you do, I'm sure it'll be good. Just pleeeaase don't become one of those writers who start a really good story, and never finishes. They're worse than scraplets. XD
| medafan 53 chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
i think raf is the best. he is a hacker. can understand bee and is best friends with him and bee is my favorite transformer, possibly eclipsed by goldbug if he is an upgraded bee.
| Airachnid-Femme chapter 3 . 5/28/2012
This is very interesting. I am excited to see how it turns out. That would be really creepy to see stuff like in the 2nd chapter. I would be terrified!
| Foxbear chapter 3 . 5/18/2012
This is a great story you have going so far. I am surprised I missed it before.
There were a few minor grammar and spelling errors. One trick I use is to let the chapter sit for twenty-four hours after I finish it before editing.
Keep up the good work!