Reviews for Heels
AriesDanger24 chapter 1 . 4/17
I reread this story every year because it is my favorite one shot in the Kidlaw series and just one of my favorite stories of them in general! I love it so much and love your writing style, this prompt is amazing and I will probably write a new review every year. It has left an impression on me and is a great story! :) Thank you!
neekneek842 chapter 1 . 11/8/2015
This was so good. I love how you depicted their inner thoughts and personalities. They're not just doing things; its reactionary because they're feeling each other out and being attentive. Nice work!
Yuki Artsa chapter 1 . 10/5/2015
Aiko: -freezes, blushes madly- Th- That was so beautiful... It could never best my love for Shiro-sama, but I won't forget this delicious story... KYAAAAAAAHHHHH, I'LL ALWAYS LOVE YOU, SHIRO-SAMAAAAAAAAAAAA!~ -hurricane of love sent to Shiro-

Shiro: -repels hurricane of love with pure negativity and disgust- Go fuck yourself, I'm sure the author won't mind if you use it as your porn. -scowls-

Aiko: YOUR WORDS SEND MY HEART ABLAZE WITH ABSOLUTE DESIRE FOR YOU, SHIRO-SAMA...!~ -swoons-

Me: -sitting in corner, writing this all out at some fucking shit time that I should be sleeping during, but clearly am not- ... Will you be the father of my babies?
Shiina Yuki chapter 1 . 8/18/2015
I didn't leave a review the first time I read this incredible fic because I was simply speechless by how good this is. Now I just reread this story for like the 1234th time idk I just want you to know that this story is really amazing, you are so talented and that you should keep writing. Thanks for writing. Love you! XD
alfamky chapter 1 . 7/26/2014
OOOO (dying from bliss) this was very very smexy smut (garbled words, first signs of craziness) the constant change of POV was well constructed, and the whole concept of the story was quite entertaining
Guest chapter 1 . 6/21/2014
This shit is heavenly 3
Kia chapter 1 . 3/4/2014
Great!
I love it!
Please write more!
Can't you write a fic about Law topping Kid? :3
Mister Law chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
This is always so damn fabulous and hot and ughh...meltingness every time I read it. I swear this must have been at least the 7th time by now. 3 you for your sheer awesomeness!
KittyCatt1036 chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
Omg I loved this.
SoulMore chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
FAN!
lg.lg.log chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
I read this story a long time ago but didn't dare to comment i'm glad i had found it again. Really good work, amazing description and sexy time oh la la la. Besides i really support the high heels idea. In resume i just love you story! Also the aprés la amour time sooooo sweet and cute, i past from "oh my, did anybody else feeling like the room get hotter?" to "awwww, scuh a cute coupleeeee" also i was squealing like a little girl all the time.
Alexa Hiwatari chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
jjaja pretty cool
theresanowlinmymarmalade chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
Haha, oh my, I loved it! great work!
melancholytree chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
This is just fantastic. :D You sure know how to write your smut, eh?
Kidd being gentle is always such a turn on to me so I was pretty much squealing and giggling through the whole story and I found it ridiculously sweet when he gave Law the option to stop.
Ah, and the "Sure, you lazy bastard, this time I'll do all the work…but next time, you pamper me, ne?" - I'm really urging you to write that, since there is from zero to none uke!Kidd fanfics.
Keep up the good work! o/
DeidaraUlquiorra chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
I really relished this... especially about Law being sexy during a foot massage. Damn, he must REALLY love his foot massages! Hey Kidd, do it more often, will ya?!
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