Reviews for VGCats The Way It Should Be REDUX
TheTenn chapter 4 . 6/7/2013
Decent story. Strange structure, text clumps together sometimes. Makes people want to tl;dr.
DannyNeko chapter 4 . 12/17/2012
This would be good for read, and I will be glad to read it.
XxCRITICxX chapter 3 . 8/3/2012
...strange, isn't it? (a movie reference)
Guest chapter 2 . 8/3/2012
Aerie's last name is Cole I'm pretty sure.
MadManMatt64 chapter 3 . 4/28/2012
First, its good to see you back in the fray. Welcome back.

Now, down to brass tacks. There is a huge room for improvement. Grammar punctuation, and sometimes wording is completely off. Also, continuity seems to be a little... not there. Was there any indication that Aeris and Rids knew each other before? Shouldn't Leo know him too if he grew up alongside Aeris? Why is Rids flirting with Aeris if he already has a girlfriend? Why did Aeris snap at Leo for almost no reason? I'm more than a little confused.

This story has the potential to be great, but that potential keeps being repressed with rookie mistakes. Please, just put a little more effort into this, and it will be much, much better. It may take longer for chapters to come out, but quality over quantity after all.