|Reviews for Full Metal Panic! The Goddess Conspiracy|
| Axcel chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
The cover image for this story is the most beautifully awesome thing I have ever seen. Humanity, Fuck Yeah!
| IdiAmeanDada chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Excellent start, looking forward to your take on this story as I really enjoyed the original (despite the casual tossing of Kaname in the trash at the beginning). Please update!
| hatswa chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
I really enjoyed reading the original story, and was saddened when it was no longer being updated. I'm glad that you have decide to take up this story. You seem to be a good writer so keep the good work up and please update I love this story.
| DarkBlade the Damned chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Greetings Ardent Warrior Poet.
Found your story recently/ I was very Happy to see that someone was continuing this idea of IWriteThings.
I think this crossover has a lot of potential.
What you have written so far is very interesting, demonic intervention saving Sosuke from certain death.
A much more dynamic start.
What you have written so far is definely worth more reviews than you have recieved to date. But It is kind of just a teaser.
You idea has me interested and your writing style so far is good but I cant really say more until I get an idea where you are going with this.
Is that a shameless request for an update, yes it is.
But the point does stand you have created and interesting premise but I need more in order to get an idea of where you plan to take this to comment further.
Good work so far and hope to see more soon.
| Mo Eazy chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Might wanna check your word processor dude, screwed up some sentences here and there, with mismatched fonts/letter size. Some odd spacing too. Not sure what happened there but if you've look through this chapter you know what I mean.
FYI you might wanna put your spoiler warnings at the top of the page. Not that I mind, I haven't read the novels or even plan to at this point but others might not have and they might appreciate the heads up.
Since this is only the first chapter I can't say much about what's going on here though I admit I'm kind of disappointed with this opening chapter only because it feels like the start of a completely different story as opposed to you inheriting "Goddess Complex". I'm having a little trouble connecting your fic with that one, granted that its only a first chapter.
I wasn't expecting you to completely follow that story but there's a difference between re-writing something and just starting a new tale altogether. If the only relation between this tale and IwriteThing's story is the "Oh My Goddess!" then you might as well not mention the latter at all.
Ignore all of this if you're still planning to work the PTSD angle, I just wanted to make my thoughts known.