Reviews for Crossing the Line |
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where the wind blows chapter 4 . 5/1/2012 Haha that's right! No was messes with the prince! And if you touch his friends... Well you will be in a lot of trouble! Please update soon! Go Aldwin! ~wind |
nekodreamstealer chapter 4 . 5/1/2012 Fantastic fight scene! And thank God for Arthur having good timing. |
NKenolagay chapter 4 . 5/1/2012 Really great Awesomeness! Hope there is more to come soon! Live Long and Prosper! |
CJaMes12 chapter 4 . 5/1/2012 This really is awesome. I am eagerly ability updating the next chapter! |
SpangleyPony chapter 4 . 5/1/2012 love it! GO ALDWIN :-D |
Selene467 chapter 4 . 5/1/2012 Yay enter Gaius another great character. Fantastic use of him ,that scene was made for him XD You wrote him very good, it was so how I can imagine him interrogating Merlin with a brush of parental concern. And Merlin's way of escape is beyond brilliant because it happens all the time that he is late so it's believable even if Gaius can smell an excuse to get out of a talk a mile away XD Typical Merlin, rather being the one suffering than someone else becoming the focus of Winston. No self preservation that boy has! Nice scene of Gwen. She is a bit oblivious to the fact that Arthur wants to be alone with her. Seriously, as if Arthur would want Merlin to join in their lovely breakfast. I also like how Merlin's mood cheered up not only from Gwen but also from bantering with Arthur. Of course you go and ruin the mood again in the next scene *sigh* poor Merlin. Oh my god, that man is absolutely psychotic! He's killing Merlin! Oh wow this idea is indeed pretty awesome, Aldwin challenging Winston to a duel. HOLY MERLIN! This will be good! Aldwin's little speech sounded so noble and brillaint, so Aldwin as I know and love him. Leave it to Merlin to change others so drastically around him. Though I'm still wondering what the hell Winston's problem is. Oh yeah I was totally waiting for Arthur's entrance and wow you did not disappoint. I can only imagine his fury but wow I felt chills when he suddenly turned up in the scene and spoke. No one hurts Merlin and gets away with it. I'm sure had Aldwin not challenged Winston yet, Arthur surely would have. I can;t decide who is worse cause both Arthur and Aldwin are dangerous when angry XD Brilliant finishing scene between Arthur and Merlin. Poor MErlin, so many injuries but gotta love the hurt/comfort Arthur manages. Those boys, you write them so well it makes me crazy. And I like how it's never really spoken outloud, but more an undertone that Arthur considers Merlin his friend, he shows it in actions rather than words probably because Arthur isn't ready to admit it out loud yet and because of how many people see servants not to mention Uther's view on servants, so in a way Arthur is protecting Merlin by not admitting anything out loud, yet thorugh his actions it shows that Merlin is his friend, I daresay his best friend XD Anyway, brilliant chapter, love the duel idea. I so hand't thought of that and it makes a lot of sense, it's the thing Aldwin would do since he is all about the honor of being one of Arthur's knights and stuff, it's nice to see Aldwin turning into the Aldwin I know, he's growing up so fast XD This lovely story of yours has me so riled up that I even refused to go to sleep. I simply had to read this first or I would be tossing and turning all night thinking about it. That is how obsessed I've become with your story! XD Thanks a million for the quick update. Eager for the next! Is there going to be only one more chapter or will Winston when he loses [cause he's obviously going to lose, right?] try a desperate attempt at Merlin again? Maybe Arthur will intervene then? I can just imagine it: Winston defeated and at Aldwin's mercy turns his fury on Merlin, blaming Merlin for everything. He acts like he's accepted his defeat and as he retreats he tries to have a go at Merlin but Arthur sees it coming or maybe Arthur and Aldwin intervene together. Double knockback for Winston. See what you're doing, you make me so crazy I start thinking of possible scenes that could happen or would be great to read. *sigh* this story has hooked its claws in me, it's that good in my opinion. update fast please if possible! Greetz Selene467 |
Henna Gamgee chapter 4 . 5/1/2012 I enjoyed this mightily. Can't wait for the fallout! Protective Arthur (and Aldwin!) is awesome. :) |
bluespiritgal chapter 4 . 5/1/2012 Great chap! Winston is pretty stupid. if he survives Aldwin, he still has to face Arthur, don't imagine that is going to go over very well. |
saroura92 chapter 4 . 5/1/2012 i like hhh! |
LinzPhantom chapter 4 . 5/1/2012 WOOOOOOOO YAH Ahh, Aldwin is my hero now. Just saying. Poor Merlin, but I like how he still stuck up for himself even when he knew he was going to get hurt XD I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH. |
bubzchoc chapter 4 . 5/1/2012 brilliant chapter |
Windmills by the sea chapter 4 . 5/1/2012 Loved it so much I love this kind of story it's exactly what I look for I'm hooked well done I can not wait for the next chapter xxx |
Ddiwerth chapter 4 . 5/1/2012 Two words for you...Win and Awesomeness! Nuff said. Great climax indeed - not OTT but nicely whumpy and painful for our Merlin, and angsty for Arthur. And I like the fact that Merlin was able to fight back to a certain extent (with and without a sword) - it's nice to know that he is not a total wimp and has learnt something after all that sparring with Arthur. Yep, am definitely team Aldwin now (not that I wasn't before, but what was on a slow simmer has now come to a rapid boil). Can't wait to see him whup Winston's backside in the next chapter. Oh and loved the bit where Merlin went to get Arthur's armour and it was the Prince who reminded him that he'd hidden it behind the drawer in his last 'cleaning up' session - pure class! Just need to find something to take this big grin off my face now, so I can sleep... |
MamzelleHermy chapter 4 . 5/1/2012 Ow poor Merlin. I can't wait to see how Gaius will eyebrow the hell out of him! And I love Aldwin currently. And Arthur. And you :D Thank you for this great story! |
DragonflyonBreak chapter 4 . 5/1/2012 Wow! That was great! I loved how Merlin escaped Gaius's questions. Very funny! :D The fight scene was great! You did an amazing job. I'm so proud of Merlin! I think he put up a pretty good fight! And I loved this line - "You want me to polish your boots?" He asked lowly. Merlin immediately turned his head downward and spat blood on Winston's leather clad feet. *insert fangirl squeal here* I love it when Merlin is all defiant like that. :D 'He dropped his knee onto Merlin's stomach and his full falling weight wrestled his breath away in a sudden harsh blow.' Ow... I winced right here. I'd be surprised if he didn't have any broken ribs. ...dang... Aldwin was awesome. I was cheering him on. I can't wait for the last chapter, though I'm sad it's ending. :'( Thanks for the update! DragonflyonBreak |