Reviews for Crossing the Line
fairy goatmother chapter 2 . 4/28/2012
uh oh...
Kool Kato chapter 2 . 4/28/2012
BIG FAN HERE ! So exciting!
Scopet chapter 2 . 4/28/2012
Great chapter. I like how the friendships are starting to form. Winston is needing his lesson learned!
ShiverMeFunzies chapter 2 . 4/28/2012
Aww, Aldwin is warming up. How sweet. Also love how Sir Gerrick and Merlin began to joke with each other. Very very cute.
Phandomoverload chapter 2 . 4/28/2012
Wow, this is really good! Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens:D
StarkTony chapter 2 . 4/28/2012
i need to find out more, this story is amazing
MamzelleHermy chapter 2 . 4/28/2012
Yay ! Loved it ! It's weird to see your Knights not entirely friends with Merlin. But it is great. I can't wait for more.
Paralelsky chapter 2 . 4/28/2012
Do you know how glad I am for having already read the next chapter? And still I'm fretting about what's going to happen to Merlin...Grr, I want to hurt Winston so hard!

Excellent chapter!
Paralelsky chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
Sorry for the delay, life got in the way...And I rhymed. :D

No matter how many times I read this chapter I still enjoy it. You have a gift!

P.S. There's a little typo in the line : "He H He had the grace to grin sheepishly, causing both Aldwin and Eadric to smirk at him " (Too many H H H)
LinzPhantom chapter 2 . 4/28/2012
Uh oh...

Merlin, sometimes you gotta keep your mouth shut.

But he's right, Winston is a bigger prat than Arthur.
Valkyriexx chapter 2 . 4/28/2012
Oh no! Really, really don't like Winston now! But, I'm guessing and hoping, that Aldwin's on his way before Merlin gets hurt!

Please update soon!
sarajm chapter 2 . 4/28/2012
Good chapter. I'm glad to see Aldwin thawing a bit. I hope you don't leave us with that cliffhanger for too long. That Winston is sure an a**!
bluespiritgal chapter 2 . 4/28/2012
Excellent chapter. Can't wait to read more!
The Volcanologist chapter 2 . 4/28/2012
ooooh pitchfork! Lot's of things can happen with that pitchfork...ARGH!
Kitty O chapter 2 . 4/28/2012
You know, Merlin is rather stupid sometimes. Let's taunt the man who just knocked you down. Brilliant!

Anywho.

I liked it. I did. I think that Aldwin is a bit of a jerk (but a good friend once you've got him), and Eadric is fiery but not bad.

Gerrick is the best of the lot, though I really think Cadmon or the Wins might be my favorites.

Poor Merlin though. He's tougher than me. Around the time I spilled on Aldwin would be the time I burst into tears, because I would be beyond stressed.
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