Short and sweet. Just what I needed. :) Thank you!

I love this story. I've read it at least a handful of times and enjoy it every time. I have to tip my hat to you - creating original characters that leep off the page and grab reader's attention is not easy, and you have a whole cast of them! Great writing and storytelling!

Gerrick is iconic. End of story.

I read 'Just Deserts' before this, but when I found out it was a part of a series, I went back to the first (this one) and have started reading them in the correct order. I love the protective!knights, the OCs are likeable (except those meant to not be of course..) and it's a generally great fic!

Interesting story.

Man, reading this after your earlier ones... Aldwin is just so awesome!

This was amazing! It really stayed true to the characters and I loved how Merlin reacted to the situations also the OC were very well written and had believable character traits! LOVED IT

ohhhhhh dude, you pissed off the wrong prince

nooooo don't hurt my baby boy...

Amazing. Perfect. I love it. A lot.
It's just simply awesome.
Very well done!

AMAZING! :P

I love your stories! Well thought out and well written stories of Arthur, Merlin, and the knights are practically nonexistent. Especially when the knights are not Gwaine and his crew. (Don't get me wrong, I love them too, but this change of scenery is refreshing). Never stop writing these!

I really liked this story, I love stories where the knights not just Arthur stands up for merlin

*much applauding* very good fanfic *w*

Aww - I loved this. I understand from your reviews that this is a prequel but I haven't read the other stories yet so I'm coming to your OCs fresh, as it where. They are brilliant - you are an astonishing writer with a wonderful vocabulary and the knights bounce of the page (screen) and seem as lifelike as the characters from the show.