This is lovely! Thanks for writing! :D

ooh, i so wanted to wring that damn asshole's neck so many times in the story! *grr*
well, Aldwin sure showed him!
i enjoyed Gerrick's humor and Cadmon's seriousness in equal parts! ;)
Arthur's anger on behalf of Merlin and because of what has been done to him was touching and quite squeal-worthy according to my Merthur-fangirl-mind... even though there was that sweet Arwen moment there, i can't help but prefer Merthur and Lawen instead! LOL

This was great! I admit, I love Wump!Merlin to. It's bad, but it's also undeniably cute in a way... I'm so evil... Anyway, great story. I loved evrything about it. Especially the part where there was no grammar/spelling errors that I saw. It really bugs me when I see them (especially in books; that really, really irks me). The best part (in my opinion) is how you make Merlin and Arthur to have a purly platonic relationship even if there are moments that might appear 'slashy.' I personally believe them to be brothers, and according to your profile, so does your dad lol. Well, I'm off to bed. I'll read more stories later :)

Go Aldwin! Go Aldwin! It's your birthday! Go Aldwin! We don't give a damn! That it's not your birthday!
Random dreamy is random.

awesome story!

Amazing story :D
The characters (both the OC's and the ones we all know and love) are so well portrayed that I could imagine them perfectly while reading, without even trying.
It's very nearly perfect on all accounts: plot, characters, grammar,...
I could go on and on all day long about all the things I loved about this story, but I'll stop for now :)
Be glad to be able to write things as good as this one :P

Yes, Go Aldwin! Aldwin's awesome for challenging Winston, and it's about time someone did. Wonder what his punishment will be...

Winston's a jerk and a few other things I'd rather not say in a review of a brilliant story. I'm glad the knights are warming up to Merlin. I really wanna know what's going to happen to Winston. I wouldn't care if his father and Uther were friends. If I were Arthur, I'd fire him from being a knight, or whatever you do to remove someone from knighthood.

Move, Merlin! If Merlin actually turned around, I'd, more or less, expect that to happen since he said that Winston strikes when his opponent's back is turned. Anyways, three more to read! Good job on the cliffie.

I am this close to impaling winston

Nice job. The story was well written and amusing. I liked the comment on charm- it was a nice touch and a clever way of lightening the general heaviness of the chapter. Keep up the good work!

God bless :)

This is a lovely story i really enjoyed reading it! Poor Merlin is always bullied by the big mean knights :( but it is nice to see he got retribution!

This was great! I absolutely loved it~ I'm SO glad that he got what he deserved.

Shame on me for not having reviewed this chapter sooner. I don't know what I was thinking.

I loved your additions to the final chapter, because I don't remember the dialogue about Aldwin's father so that must have been put in later.

You also did something I thought to be quite impossible: made the fight scene even more vivid and visually clear. I'm in awe!

This was an excellent fic. I raise a glass in your honour and drink to many more to come!

P.S. Sometimes tomorrow I'll give you back the chapter we were last talking about. :D

P.P.S. I'm blushing. Best beta ever...Seriously? ;)

DAMN YOU WINSTON! I SWEAR, IF I GET MY HANDS ON YOU...

Oh wait. I can't...fictional character...ahaha...ha..ha...Temporary loss of sanity. Carry on.